Dust of gold

I was sitting
Near a window
Watching the sight 
When i saw some shining dust flying 
Under the sun'weak embrace 
It was a humble charm
With a mind calming sight 
The golden spec of dusts
Flying and flying
Dancing under the 
Weak sun light
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Agustin Avatar
July 7, 2024 at 4:45 AM
Thanks for sharing your thoughts through your wonderful poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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July 7, 2024 at 5:49 PM
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July 4, 2024 at 7:34 PM
Lovely Luna, the dance of gold dust, just beautiful. Welcome to PoetrySoup… Beryl
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Lawless Avatar
July 4, 2024 at 5:11 AM
Excellent.....this had me sitting and pondering its peace.....and that is the art of poetry....to capture its reader in a web of painted words. Methinks a FAVE is in order....
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July 7, 2024 at 5:49 PM
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Croft Avatar
July 4, 2024 at 4:05 AM
Oh this is so true! I have sat at my kitchen table watching these fine golden specs swirling around in the sunlight!
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July 7, 2024 at 5:49 PM
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Allison Avatar
July 4, 2024 at 3:27 AM
Bravo La Luna now this is a perfect example of why not to do housework when you get that golden dust dancing in the sunlight:-) hugs jan xx
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July 7, 2024 at 5:48 PM
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