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Dust of gold

I was sitting Near a window Watching the sight When i saw some shining dust flying Under the sun'weak embrace It was a humble charm With a mind calming sight The golden spec of dusts Flying and flying Dancing under the Weak sun light

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Beata Agustin

Date: 7/7/2024 4:45:00 AM

Thanks for sharing your thoughts through your wonderful poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Luna La
Date: 7/7/2024 5:49:00 PM

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Beryl Edmonds

Date: 7/4/2024 7:34:00 PM

Lovely Luna, the dance of gold dust, just beautiful. Welcome to PoetrySoup… Beryl

Luna La
Date: 7/7/2024 5:49:00 PM

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Tom Woody

Date: 7/4/2024 5:45:00 AM

Nice poetic observation of something most of us wouldn't give a second thought to

Luna La
Date: 7/7/2024 5:49:00 PM

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John Lawless

Date: 7/4/2024 5:11:00 AM

Excellent.....this had me sitting and pondering its peace.....and that is the art of poetry....to capture its reader in a web of painted words. Methinks a FAVE is in order....

Luna La
Date: 7/7/2024 5:49:00 PM

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Karen Croft

Date: 7/4/2024 4:05:00 AM

Oh this is so true! I have sat at my kitchen table watching these fine golden specs swirling around in the sunlight!

Luna La
Date: 7/7/2024 5:49:00 PM

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Jan Allison

Date: 7/4/2024 3:27:00 AM

Bravo La Luna now this is a perfect example of why not to do housework when you get that golden dust dancing in the sunlight:-) hugs jan xx

Luna La
Date: 7/7/2024 5:48:00 PM

Thanks