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Dust Mights

The sands of time
swirl about the streets
fleeing sunset
fearful of a darkness
looming in each daybreak.


©8/27/2018


For End August Premiere 2018 – Poetry contest

darktimefree verse

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Gregory Richard Barden

August 29, 2018 at 5:38 PM

Yeah, this is exquisite and going into my favs ... you never waste words, (and I never waste time reading your work), and utilize phrasing in a way that creates the most imagery with the least amount of words - THAT is an art form, in my opinion, and you have mastered it. Divine and darkly delirious - love this! :-)

John Lawless

August 29, 2018 at 11:56 PM

It has been said that: "Brevity is the soul of wit". i always love the challenge of painting a picture with the fewest brush(or pen) strokes. thank you for your uplifting comment.It has been said that: "Brevity is the soul of wit". i always love the challenge of painting a picture with the fewest brush(or pen) strokes. thank you for your uplifting comment.