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Cobwebs catching settling dust, they save me much work. Machinery showing rust, a colorful quirk. It’s all a total must. It’s part of what is. like a pie with a crust, a soda with fizz. One shouldn’t sweat the small stuff, like a dust bunny under the bed, or a golf ball in the rough. They’re just cobwebs in one's head. Cobwebs and Dust theme written 3/21/2012 for Francine Robert's contest.

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Date: 5/12/2012 9:25:00 PM
A fun write, Robert!:) "rust, a colorful quirk"...that one grabbed my at my thoughts! Oh, and that "dust bunny", s'ok when its sleeping under the bed, but not fun when air starts making it hop around? I really enjoyed this write, thanks for sharing Robert! Best wishes...Mikki :)
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Date: 4/26/2012 8:11:00 PM
Cleverly maintained rhyme scheme with a pleasing flow... interesting phrasing! Well done, Robert!! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 4/1/2012 9:16:00 PM
bravo robert!
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Date: 3/28/2012 12:13:00 PM
This poem of yours makes me feel so much better. We have so many animals that housekeeping is difficult. The spider webs are so thick that they have trapped even the spiders. Splendid write, dear Robert. Love, daver
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Date: 3/28/2012 11:46:00 AM
:-) Love the message here Rob. One I try to remind myself of daily!
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Date: 3/25/2012 3:03:00 AM
A stunning interpretation Robert, really enjoyed this! Wishing you the best for the contest ;) enjoy your Sunday! Love Wilma
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Date: 3/24/2012 12:44:00 PM
oh i really like this! good message and a fanastic ending! if she doesn't like this, there are cobwebs in her head!
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Date: 3/24/2012 10:19:00 AM
Nice poem. Hope you do well in the contest.
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Date: 3/23/2012 4:59:00 PM
Clever! You take dust to a higher level and I'm sure Francine will love it as I do.
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Date: 3/22/2012 7:28:00 AM
Like this one Robert, luck to you in the contest!!! Have a lovely day. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 3/21/2012 6:47:00 PM
Well done, Robert! Good luck in the contest. Best wishes, Caroline.
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