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Dust From the Past

At first, I thought that we could be together You made me happy and made me burst into laughter You were there when I'm sad You wiped my tears and told me "Please don't be mad." But now, I've realized the mere fact The truth hurts like you've been hit by a truck I hope that my heart would mend as soon as possible Even though I know it's very impossible I know someday, maybe someday I'll be over you night and day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/3/2017 6:28:00 AM
Ah! Very gentle and lovely poem. Keep on writing.
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Date: 3/21/2016 9:30:00 PM
Claudine Barquio, awesome poem. LINDA
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Claudine Barquio
Date: 3/29/2016 7:52:00 PM
Thank you miss Linda :) You have written many poems already and those poems are very nice. Nowadays I don't have much time anymore to make poems, well anyways I will find a way because that is my favorite hobby :)
Date: 1/15/2016 9:33:00 PM
Claudine, I like every line of your poem above. Thank you for sharing. ** SKAT **
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Claudine Barquio
Date: 3/6/2016 6:41:00 PM
Thank you ^^
Date: 11/16/2014 11:03:00 PM
Such a beautiful poem, I hope you are now filled with smiles!
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Date: 11/15/2014 1:22:00 AM
Started nice, to sadness undisguised, ended with spice! Great piece, kabayan. New friend, Kim Patrice. :)
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Date: 11/14/2014 7:47:00 PM
Congratulations, Claudine. Well done.
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Claudine Barquio
Date: 11/15/2014 1:13:00 AM
thank you :)
Date: 11/14/2014 7:03:00 PM
Aweeee !!! Sad, but I like your ending. Enjoyed !! Congrats on your win !!
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Claudine Barquio
Date: 11/15/2014 1:13:00 AM
thank you :)
Date: 11/14/2014 11:56:00 AM
Congratulations on a well-deserved win! Love it! Pandita
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Claudine Barquio
Date: 11/15/2014 1:13:00 AM
thank you :)
Date: 11/5/2014 3:27:00 PM
such a warm and lovely poem here.. keep writing!! ^_^ >.:))
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Claudine Barquio
Date: 11/7/2014 1:50:00 AM
thank you :))

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