Dust From the Past

At first, I thought that we could be together
You made me happy and made me burst into laughter
You were there when I'm sad
You wiped my tears and told me "Please don't be mad."

But now, I've realized the mere fact
The truth hurts like you've been hit by a truck
I hope that my heart would mend as soon as possible
Even though I know it's very impossible

I know someday, maybe someday
I'll be over you night and day
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Agustin Avatar
December 11, 2024 at 9:42 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Black Avatar
January 3, 2017 at 6:28 AM
Ah! Very gentle and lovely poem. Keep on writing.
A   Avatar
March 21, 2016 at 9:30 PM
Claudine Barquio, awesome poem. LINDA
Barquio Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 7:52 PM
Thank you miss Linda :) You have written many poems already and those poems are very nice. Nowadays I don't have much time anymore to make poems, well anyways I will find a way because that is my favorite hobby :)
A  Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 9:33 PM
Claudine, I like every line of your poem above. Thank you for sharing. ** SKAT **
Barquio Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 6:41 PM
Thank you ^^
Vaso Avatar
November 16, 2014 at 11:03 PM
Such a beautiful poem, I hope you are now filled with smiles!
Nunez Avatar
November 15, 2014 at 1:22 AM
Started nice, to sadness undisguised, ended with spice! Great piece, kabayan. New friend, Kim Patrice. :)
Gibson Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 7:47 PM
Congratulations, Claudine. Well done.
Barquio Avatar
November 15, 2014 at 1:13 AM
thank you :)
Squyres Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 7:03 PM
Aweeee !!! Sad, but I like your ending. Enjoyed !! Congrats on your win !!
Barquio Avatar
November 15, 2014 at 1:13 AM
thank you :)
Sietesantos Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 11:56 AM
Congratulations on a well-deserved win! Love it! Pandita
Barquio Avatar
November 15, 2014 at 1:13 AM
thank you :)
Torres Avatar
November 5, 2014 at 3:27 PM
such a warm and lovely poem here.. keep writing!! ^_^ >.:))
Barquio Avatar
November 7, 2014 at 1:50 AM
thank you :))
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