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Dust From the Past

Dust From the Past They aren’t all bad, these dusty memories, my mind sees fit to retain. Where they all stay hidden, you see, is not for me to explain. Some are just like static shocking me sharply into pleasant scenes while others are like the stove hood greased over so the memory clings. Some appear quite often and others not often enough. Some bring a smile to this old face but for some the remembrance is tough. They must collect like errant dust trapped awaiting brain's nerves to synapse or perhaps they wait for a dusting thought to collect them in hearts relapse?

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Date: 11/14/2014 10:59:00 PM
Hi Debra. This has a nice flow and movement. Very well structured. It was an interesting read. Congratulations on your excellent win. Take care. Earl
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Date: 11/14/2014 7:38:00 PM
Love this, Debra. Congratulations.
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Date: 11/14/2014 2:56:00 PM
Love your poem, Debra. Your words really hit home, as many of us share the feelings your poem conveys. Congratulations on win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 11/14/2014 2:53:00 AM
some memories are best forgotten others rise to the surface so vividly especially with my elderly mum who has dementia - great write:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan
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Date: 11/6/2014 11:48:00 AM
Memories help us remember who we are but sometimes in the aging process that is lost..Sad..Great write about the topic..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 11/2/2014 12:31:00 PM
Very clever writing, especially the greased stove hood, this was spot on understood. Good poem Debra!
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Date: 11/2/2014 12:01:00 PM
- Some memory we let be on the shelf to collect dust .... the second we wipe the dust off to think back on .... sweet or sad - Enjoy reading your poem today Debra! - Good luck in the contest - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Debra Squyres
Date: 11/2/2014 12:02:00 PM
Indeed we do, Anne Lise, Thank you !!

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