Dust From the Past

Dust From the Past

They aren’t all bad,
these dusty memories, 
my mind sees 
fit to retain.
Where they all
stay hidden, you see,
is not for me
to explain.

Some are just 
like static
shocking me sharply
into pleasant scenes
while others 
are like the stove hood 
greased over
so the memory clings.

Some appear
quite often
and others
not often enough.
Some bring a smile
to this old face
but for some
the remembrance
is tough.

They must collect
like errant dust
trapped awaiting
brain's nerves 
to synapse
or perhaps they wait
for a dusting thought
to collect them
in hearts relapse?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 11/14/2014 10:59:00 PM
Hi Debra. This has a nice flow and movement. Very well structured. It was an interesting read. Congratulations on your excellent win. Take care. Earl
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Date: 11/14/2014 7:38:00 PM
Love this, Debra. Congratulations.
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Date: 11/14/2014 2:56:00 PM
Love your poem, Debra. Your words really hit home, as many of us share the feelings your poem conveys. Congratulations on win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 11/14/2014 2:53:00 AM
some memories are best forgotten others rise to the surface so vividly especially with my elderly mum who has dementia - great write:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan
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Date: 11/6/2014 11:48:00 AM
Memories help us remember who we are but sometimes in the aging process that is lost..Sad..Great write about the topic..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 11/2/2014 12:31:00 PM
Very clever writing, especially the greased stove hood, this was spot on understood. Good poem Debra!
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Date: 11/2/2014 12:01:00 PM
- Some memory we let be on the shelf to collect dust .... the second we wipe the dust off to think back on .... sweet or sad - Enjoy reading your poem today Debra! - Good luck in the contest - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/2/2014 12:02:00 PM
Indeed we do, Anne Lise, Thank you !!
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