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DUST DEVIL RISING
It begins the way most awakenings do~
quietly,
a shiver in the sand
no one else notices.
A dust devil lifts itself
from the far edge of morning,
a thin column of wandering breath
gathering shape
as if the desert were whispering,
Now. Now is the moment.
It spins slowly at first,
testing its own edges,
learning the language of motion
after years of stillness.
Then it rises~
a small, determined spiral
of grit and light,
carrying the day’s first gold
in its turning hands.
I watch it from the trail,
feeling something in me
answer its motion~
the same something
that once stirred behind a classroom window,
restless as chalk dust,
waiting for a wind
strong enough to lift it.
The dust devil sways,
leans into its own becoming,
then spins brighter~
a brief lantern of sand
lit from within
by the desert’s breath.
And I know:
this is what it feels like
when a long-sleeping dream
finally stands up,
shakes the years from its shoulders,
and begins to move
in its own wild, rightful direction.
The dust devil dissolves
as softly as it formed,
falling back into the earth
like a story returning to silence.
But the air remembers.
And so do I~
because something in me
is rising too,
carrying its own light
into the widening day.
You may read the accompanying personal narrative at: poetrysoup.com/short_stories/swirling_dervishes_13875
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