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Dust Devil Days

A parched wind still circles the dust devils corralling them in funneled fury. The old rooster atop the barn squeaks as the weather changes as do the joints in the old blue jeans. Hard black coffee bubbles on the stove, her apron hangs a memory on the chair, an old screen door shudders, slams shut, an old dog curses the dust. Bowed heads watch as he laces his boots, reaches for that damned hat, sips the last of the coffee runs his fingers across the hanging apron whispers “I love you”, sets off to worship in the shrine of their lives. ©5/7/2018 for Laura Loo – Best Free Verse Poem In May 2018 Poetry Contest

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Date: 7/4/2018 12:03:00 PM
Oh wow! This is an amazing write. I was right there watching this man, my heart so touched. Congratulations on this win. A fave.
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Date: 7/3/2018 6:38:00 AM
I read this poem a few times and each time read something different, it intrigued me. great poem! thank you for your entry and congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 6/30/2018 9:24:00 AM
This is just terrific John...
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Date: 6/29/2018 11:47:00 PM
Nicely crafted my friend...best of luck...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 6/29/2018 5:50:00 PM
Wow!! What a story you tell. It's like a movie in my mind and I want to see it again. Super write, John!
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