Dust Devil Days

A parched wind
still circles the dust devils
corralling them
in funneled fury.
The old rooster
atop the barn
squeaks
as the weather changes
as do the joints
in the old blue jeans.
Hard black coffee
bubbles on the stove,
her apron hangs
a memory
on the chair,
an old screen door
shudders,
slams shut,
an old dog curses
the dust.
Bowed heads watch
as he laces his boots,
reaches for that
damned hat,
sips the last of the coffee
runs his fingers
across the hanging apron
whispers
“I love you”,
sets off to worship
in the shrine
of their lives.


©5/7/2018

for Laura Loo – Best Free Verse Poem In May 2018 Poetry Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 7/4/2018 12:03:00 PM
Oh wow! This is an amazing write. I was right there watching this man, my heart so touched. Congratulations on this win. A fave.
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Date: 7/3/2018 6:38:00 AM
I read this poem a few times and each time read something different, it intrigued me. great poem! thank you for your entry and congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 6/30/2018 9:24:00 AM
This is just terrific John...
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Date: 6/29/2018 11:47:00 PM
Nicely crafted my friend...best of luck...love & light...^WW^
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Date: 6/29/2018 5:50:00 PM
Wow!! What a story you tell. It's like a movie in my mind and I want to see it again. Super write, John!
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