Notes About The Poem

This was inspired by Shadow Hamilton's Dust Poetry Contest.  The dust settled before I could meet the 8 line minimum.  A thank you to Shadow for the inspiration.

Dust Danced

Dust Danced

Dust danced above the unset table
mocking the sun’s attempt at warmth
randomly cavorted through the vacancy
of forever, and never, in collision. 



3/19/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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March 19, 2017 at 7:08 PM
Keep going, John! This is good stuff...don't let the dust settle quite yet, lol :)
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