Dust Bunnies

Gathering under my bed, dust bunnies congregate,
fluffy and gray, but I'm resolute,
I have a broom to reach them, but then I hesitate,
live and let live, I say, as they're so dag-gone cute!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Fowler Avatar
February 18, 2024 at 2:28 PM
Cuteness Regina. I received a robot vacuum recently and I love that it goes under the bed and other furniture for me. No more crawling down to extend the old vacuum to hard-to-reach places! Your poem is so cute...being reluctant to suck up those bunnies! :)
Kerr Avatar
February 12, 2024 at 12:37 AM
Regina Your prodigious pen continues to craft pieces long and short with equal aplomb. Many thanks for your insightful reviews of my recent works. Have a great week Howard
Elliott Avatar
February 12, 2024 at 4:19 PM
My enthusiastic thanks, Howard. I hope your week has started off well, and may you have some wondrous creative penning too. Many of God's blessings to you. ~
One Avatar
February 10, 2024 at 8:30 AM
Very creative.. do they really look like dust bunnies? Maybe if you thought they were dust gremlins, it might be easy to clean them..
Elliott Avatar
February 12, 2024 at 3:59 PM
Hi Silent One, I drew an illustration of dusty bunnies that go with the poem, but I'll need to wait until my daughter has free time to see if she can put a photo of it with the poem. Thank you for coming to my page and being supportive. All the best to you ~
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