Dust

Dust Flecks of dust awaits gust of abundant wind Destinations unknown just avoiding the rain 02/21/2021 6:18 p.m. Riviera Beach Florida USA

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/24/2021 6:14:00 PM

I like the movement here from looming profound significance to -- eh, nothing beyond mere survival ~ Dusty

Anselmo Boles
Date: 5/24/2021 10:32:00 PM

Lol. You got it! There's a deeper meaning implied, but the more practical side of it is that, dust just don't want to turn into mud! Thanks Gershon!...ab

L Milton Hankins

Date: 5/21/2021 12:53:00 PM

Very interesting little piece of writing, Anselmo. I read it with much interest...several times!

Anselmo Boles
Date: 5/21/2021 1:55:00 PM

Good to know Milton. It speaks of the uncertainty of one's fate, but hopeful that the end won't be so harsh. I just posted another piece called "From A Distant Shore", this one should have a more elaborate tone. Thanks always.--ab