Dusky Dale

Painted with magical hues

That glistening lake

Reflecting embellished sky

Time to take a break

Waiting for  night’s veil

Chirping birds racing to perch

In my dusky dale

Irfana Ali bhat
Contest: Wonder of dusk in Seguidilla
29/09/2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
January 16, 2013 at 2:17 PM
what a lovely picture. A dale is a word not too common to non english. I like how you used that word!
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October 9, 2012 at 12:20 PM
Congrats Irfana on your win in the contest!Beautiful verse!
Gorelick Avatar
October 9, 2012 at 7:05 AM
Congrats on your pretty poem being a winner. BG
Brown Avatar
October 9, 2012 at 5:23 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Wonder of Dusk in Sequidilla"contest Irfana. Love, Carol
Ali Bhat Avatar
October 9, 2012 at 6:41 AM
thanks Carol..:)))
Kendrick Avatar
September 29, 2012 at 2:39 PM
Enjoyed reading this one today..Must be a contest requirement for I am reading many of these..Sara
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September 29, 2012 at 2:25 PM
FANTASTIC!!!!
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