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Duskdream (A Palindrome)

I
create you
gold light of lilies
Faces painted – you – my heart
Sunsets create colors
Shimmering…
Colors create sunsets
My heart – you – painted faces. 
Lilies of light gold
You create
I.

lovelightlighti do not know?

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Bic Gi-Sa

November 20, 2017 at 12:46 PM

You are a true talent!

Skat A

January 3, 2016 at 7:00 PM

Amazing,

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 21, 2010 at 1:25 PM

Congrats Grace on your HM in the Palindrome contest ..enjoy your special honor for a special write..with luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 21, 2010 at 7:08 AM

Congratulations Grace on your win in Jared Pickett's contest "The Palindrone". Love,Carol

Nick Bagnall

July 21, 2010 at 4:37 AM

Nice imagery, I can see the sunset and the pond, and for some reason lots of white stone pillars, you must plugged into an old memory somewhere - well done

John Freeman

July 20, 2010 at 11:06 PM

Congratulations grace, on your hm, Agape, Moses

Andrea Dietrich

July 5, 2010 at 2:10 PM

This is wonderful. My only problem with palindromes is that I am such a stickler for rules and I am wanting to say you create ME. haha.But I am seeing everyone writing them like this. Gosh, I will make myself crazy trying to write one of these things. A grammar teacher's nightmare they should be called. LUv, Andrea Ps so nice reading your poetry today!!

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

July 3, 2010 at 6:45 PM

Your title was amazing and the poem that went with it was a dream as well-- enjoyed this palindrome Grace--it's really very artistic--nikko :)

Sara Kendrick

June 29, 2010 at 1:12 PM

Great write that was very expressive and descriptive...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

Gert W. Knop

June 29, 2010 at 6:56 AM

Enjoyed this freshness of words, Grace! so nicely penned! Wish you good luck in the contest and thank you for commenting "Butterflies". Keep your imagination flowing!:)..Gert