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Duskdream (A Palindrome)

I
create you
gold light of lilies
Faces painted – you – my heart
Sunsets create colors
Shimmering…
Colors create sunsets
My heart – you – painted faces. 
Lilies of light gold
You create
I.

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Bic Gi-Sa Date: 11/20/2017 12:46:00 PM You are a true talent! Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 1/3/2016 7:00:00 PM Amazing, Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 7/21/2010 1:25:00 PM Congrats Grace on your HM in the Palindrome contest ..enjoy your special honor for a special write..with luv.. Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 7/21/2010 7:08:00 AM Congratulations Grace on your win in Jared Pickett's contest "The Palindrone". Love,Carol Login to Reply

Nick Bagnall Date: 7/21/2010 4:37:00 AM Nice imagery, I can see the sunset and the pond, and for some reason lots of white stone pillars, you must plugged into an old memory somewhere - well done Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 7/20/2010 11:06:00 PM Congratulations grace, on your hm, Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/5/2010 2:10:00 PM This is wonderful. My only problem with palindromes is that I am such a stickler for rules and I am wanting to say you create ME. haha.But I am seeing everyone writing them like this. Gosh, I will make myself crazy trying to write one of these things. A grammar teacher's nightmare they should be called. LUv, Andrea Ps so nice reading your poetry today!! Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 7/3/2010 6:45:00 PM Your title was amazing and the poem that went with it was a dream as well-- enjoyed this palindrome Grace--it's really very artistic--nikko :) Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 6/29/2010 1:12:00 PM Great write that was very expressive and descriptive...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara Login to Reply

Gert W. Knop Date: 6/29/2010 6:56:00 AM Enjoyed this freshness of words, Grace! so nicely penned! Wish you good luck in the contest and thank you for commenting "Butterflies". Keep your imagination flowing!:)..Gert Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 6/29/2010 3:09:00 AM Short and sweet but wonderful entry to the the contest. Good luck Login to Reply