Dusk Till Dawn

I travel to & from work at dusk & dawn.
From womb to cage, then back again.
I have grown grey, not quite day.
Invisible, too tired to be seen.
Another citizen of in-between.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Zzzzz Avatar
May 13, 2011 at 6:11 AM
Interesting write; a poem for everyman, almost.
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March 6, 2010 at 5:17 AM
I do relate . A great poem indeed. I have enjoyed reading . I also would love to thank you for reading my poems. By the way ''s.k.a.t.'' is my signoff on any poem..It is short for --silly kitty attitude toytry poetry.... I do enjoy fun with my work. THANKS AGAIN FOR YOUR COMMENT....
Owens Avatar
January 24, 2010 at 1:26 PM
Very thought provoking...enjoyed...Marty
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January 22, 2010 at 11:53 AM
I like it very very good. Oh and thanks for all your comments. you have Soup Mail!
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January 22, 2010 at 10:31 AM
Another citizen of in-between...i like that. many of us are. xo R.e.c.k
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January 21, 2010 at 11:49 AM
Thought provoking poem. I think most will relate to your words as we all have our tough times. I really like the last line. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Thank you for your kind comment. Keep on writing! Karen
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