Dusk Rose

New beginnings seep, twilight
etches skylines chilled.. 
Receding montages fade
into blue distilled
licked by comet's tails
caressed by the milky way,
a balm for what ails




Poet: Debbie Guzzi
Contest:WONDER OF DUSK IN SEGUIDILLA
10/1/2012

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Kash Poet

October 9, 2012 at 12:02 PM

You have painted a beautiful picture here Debi.Congrats on the win.

Bukang Liwayway

October 9, 2012 at 7:29 AM

Congrats friend Debbie on your win...very nice poem. cheers!

Barbara Gorelick

October 9, 2012 at 7:01 AM

Sigh..lovely...congrats. BG

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 9, 2012 at 5:16 AM

Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Wonder of Dusk in Sequidilla"contest Debbie. Love, Carol

Irfana Ali Bhat

October 9, 2012 at 3:03 AM

what imagery!!! congratulations on ur win...:))

Harry Horsman

October 2, 2012 at 10:29 AM

your poems sure inspire one Debbie... so poetic, so profound....

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 2, 2012 at 6:41 AM

Easy to read easy to love your little poem Debbie. Wish you good luck in contest!! oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

October 1, 2012 at 9:42 PM

SIMPLY ELEGANT AND BEAUTIFUL CANVAS OF WORDS DEBBIE LUV .. AMAZING VIEW SURE TO CAPTURE NETTE'S EYE .. WINNING WISHES .. THANKXX SO MUCH FOR MY BIG WIN .. HOPE U HAD A GREAT BIRTHDAY .. WE R BPTIZING LITTLE GUY THIS SUNDAY WITH BIG PARTY AT OUR HOME AFTER .. CHILLY HERE NOW SO A FIREPLACE MOMENT IF COOL THIS WEEKEND .. NEW LIFE IS SO MAGICAL ..

Russell Sivey

October 1, 2012 at 4:13 PM

What a delightful and charming write my friend! I really enjoyed this harmonious and wondrous poem Debbie! Just to let you know, Nette requested that you submit the Form to be Rhyme, just thought you should know in case Nette takes off for that! You've done magnificently with this piece, Great Work!!