Dusk From Dawn From Dusk

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The form of this poem was inspired by a very insightful comment left to me on my poem "Tragedy in Black" by Frank Blacharczyk If you see this, thanks Frank.

Dusk 
                                                                                               from Dawn, 
                                                                                            the sun blinks 
                                                                                       as clouds whisper 
                                                                                       soft hues of color, 
                                                                            kissing the dark sky with 
                                                                           ever changing silhouettes 
                                                                   purple, yellow and red shadows 
                                                       distant in blue skies kissed by gold lips, 
Dawn from Dusk, the circle of life remains
distant in blue skies kissed by gold lips, 
purple, yellow and red shadows 
ever changing silhouettes 
kissing the dark sky with 
soft hues of color, 
as clouds whisper 
the sun blinks 
from Dawn, 
Dusk 



08/23/15

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CayCay Jennings

Date: 9/1/2015 11:46:00 AM

Again, amazing talent ... CayCay

James Inman
Date: 9/1/2015 12:11:00 PM

Beautiful comment, CayCay, thank you

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/28/2015 4:53:00 PM

oh and I can't recall if i have faved you as a poet. Will check and see about that too!

James Inman
Date: 8/28/2015 5:16:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea. You have long been a favorite of mine. Looking forward to seeing the form. Even before I started posting here.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/28/2015 4:52:00 PM

I see that my friend Jan was already here with multiple WOWOWOWOW's. I can see why. This is so awesome! OK, now I have to challenge you to do a certain type of etheree that is really going to challenge you. but it will end up like this one, a tiny masterpiece. Let me go find this one form that someone challenged me to do, and I will forward you the link so you can see how I did it!! Again, I loved this etheree of yours. One time a judge made us do this kind of backwards writing, but not etheree!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/28/2015 4:52:00 PM

I shall fave this one too!!