Notes About The Poem

The form of this poem was inspired by a very insightful comment left to me on my poem "Tragedy in Black" by Frank Blacharczyk  If you see this, thanks Frank.

Dusk From Dawn From Dusk

Dusk 
                                                                                               from Dawn, 
                                                                                            the sun blinks 
                                                                                       as clouds whisper 
                                                                                       soft hues of color, 
                                                                            kissing the dark sky with 
                                                                           ever changing silhouettes 
                                                                   purple, yellow and red shadows 
                                                       distant in blue skies kissed by gold lips, 
Dawn from Dusk, the circle of life remains
distant in blue skies kissed by gold lips, purple, yellow and red shadows ever changing silhouettes kissing the dark sky with soft hues of color, as clouds whisper the sun blinks from Dawn, Dusk 08/23/15
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Godwin Avatar
September 1, 2015 at 11:46 AM
Again, amazing talent ... CayCay
Inman Avatar
September 1, 2015 at 12:11 PM
Beautiful comment, CayCay, thank you
Dietrich Avatar
August 28, 2015 at 4:53 PM
oh and I can't recall if i have faved you as a poet. Will check and see about that too!
Inman Avatar
August 28, 2015 at 5:16 PM
Thank you, Andrea. You have long been a favorite of mine. Looking forward to seeing the form. Even before I started posting here.
Dietrich Avatar
August 28, 2015 at 4:52 PM
I shall fave this one too!!
Dietrich Avatar
August 28, 2015 at 4:52 PM
I see that my friend Jan was already here with multiple WOWOWOWOW's. I can see why. This is so awesome! OK, now I have to challenge you to do a certain type of etheree that is really going to challenge you. but it will end up like this one, a tiny masterpiece. Let me go find this one form that someone challenged me to do, and I will forward you the link so you can see how I did it!! Again, I loved this etheree of yours. One time a judge made us do this kind of backwards writing, but not etheree!
Allison Avatar
August 24, 2015 at 5:15 PM
WOW WOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOW! AWESOME JAMES INTO FAVES THIS IS FABULOUSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS:-) HUGS jAN XX
Inman Avatar
August 24, 2015 at 6:19 PM
What a comment! I'll assume you like It. Thank you Jan!
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