Dusk

Peaceful reflections
Silhouetted trees appear;
Dusk is on the verge.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 12/19/2008 4:04:00 AM
Raul, Very nice Haiku YOU are A very talented POET I would never get tired of reading The short forms of POETRY I will contact Your Friends tonight after Work Happy Holidays...HG
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Date: 12/4/2008 2:45:00 PM
So full of peace and illustration Raul beautiful my friend. Thank you for your comment's my christian brother. Christ love and my love to you. Blessing's to you and your wonderful family. Michael
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Date: 12/3/2008 8:14:00 PM
great haiku. this my favorite form of poetry......
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Date: 11/30/2008 12:41:00 PM
Nice haiku you have here, thanks for the comments on my poems
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Date: 11/30/2008 8:12:00 AM
Lik the play on words in L3 Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
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Date: 11/25/2008 1:06:00 PM
I like the serenity of this poem. Nice use of imagery. Enjoyed it! Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind comments on my poem. Keep on writing. Happy Thanksgiving! Karen
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Date: 11/25/2008 6:49:00 AM
Great poem, strong but gentle, Fritz Purdum
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Date: 11/25/2008 4:07:00 AM
My very favorite time of day! I love it when everything starts to go into silhouette. Just beautiful!
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Date: 11/24/2008 3:43:00 PM
Nice tribute to the end of day. Loved the scene you painted. Love Elizabeth
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Date: 11/24/2008 2:54:00 PM
Beautiful time of day. Wonderful expression. Love, Shar
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Date: 11/24/2008 12:56:00 PM
A very lovely haiku, Raul! So serene, it feels quiet and soft! ~Love, Carrie
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Date: 11/24/2008 12:52:00 PM
Beautiful haiku, dusk is so dreamy, love ly write, love Kristin
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Date: 11/24/2008 11:20:00 AM
This is a beautiful Haiku. I'm glad you liked my new one. If you noticed both these poems were posted at the same time. As always, thank you and God bless. Love, Robin
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