Dusk

Peaceful reflections
Silhouetted trees appear;
Dusk is on the verge.

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

December 19, 2008 at 4:04 AM

Raul, Very nice Haiku YOU are A very talented POET I would never get tired of reading The short forms of POETRY I will contact Your Friends tonight after Work Happy Holidays...HG

Michael Torres

December 4, 2008 at 2:45 PM

So full of peace and illustration Raul beautiful my friend. Thank you for your comment's my christian brother. Christ love and my love to you. Blessing's to you and your wonderful family. Michael

Abe Lopez

December 3, 2008 at 8:14 PM

great haiku. this my favorite form of poetry......

Daniel Neal

November 30, 2008 at 12:41 PM

Nice haiku you have here, thanks for the comments on my poems

Brian Strand

November 30, 2008 at 8:12 AM

Lik the play on words in L3 Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

November 25, 2008 at 1:06 PM

I like the serenity of this poem. Nice use of imagery. Enjoyed it! Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind comments on my poem. Keep on writing. Happy Thanksgiving! Karen

Fritz Purdum

November 25, 2008 at 6:49 AM

Great poem, strong but gentle, Fritz Purdum

Juliane Thomas

November 25, 2008 at 4:07 AM

My very favorite time of day! I love it when everything starts to go into silhouette. Just beautiful!

Elizabeth Neal

November 24, 2008 at 3:43 PM

Nice tribute to the end of day. Loved the scene you painted. Love Elizabeth

Sharon Winter

November 24, 2008 at 2:54 PM

Beautiful time of day. Wonderful expression. Love, Shar

Carrie Richards

November 24, 2008 at 12:56 PM

A very lovely haiku, Raul! So serene, it feels quiet and soft! ~Love, Carrie

Kristin Reynolds

November 24, 2008 at 12:52 PM

Beautiful haiku, dusk is so dreamy, love ly write, love Kristin

Robin L. Gass

November 24, 2008 at 11:20 AM

This is a beautiful Haiku. I'm glad you liked my new one. If you noticed both these poems were posted at the same time. As always, thank you and God bless. Love, Robin

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