Constance La France Poet Verse

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Duplex

 
UNTIL FOREVER

Oh, d e a t h 
sad end-
with DEEP
sorrow
I weep.

My tears
endless-
F A L L I N G
always
farewell.

My LOVE-
mom, dad,
grandma
sister
b a b y .

R e p o s e
in peace
U N T I L
I come
to you.

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December 7, 2016


Poetry/Verse/Duplex
Copyright Protected, ID 16-855-941-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

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sponsor, Jan Allison

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Andrea Dietrich December 11, 2016 at 8:47 PM big congrats, Constance. I wish I had time to check emails and stuff but I have dang housework and dinner and it's so late. Hope you had a nice day. Mine was pretty nice.

Alexis Y. December 11, 2016 at 5:02 AM Hi BW, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved: -) Alexis

Darren White December 10, 2016 at 11:58 PM I congratulate you on your win. It has melancholy and yearning. And the form accentuates it.

Agnes Krampe December 10, 2016 at 7:55 PM Congrats on your win, Constance, with this sad and beautiful poem.

Jan Allison December 10, 2016 at 6:33 PM Many congrats on your top spot Constance :-) I did wonder if this one was yours as it has your trademark melancholy style:-) hugs Jan xx

Duke Beaufort December 10, 2016 at 12:14 PM They are all part of you. You have DNA shared with all of them. That is our essence. I feel very lucky that I am able to read this deep and beautiful set of words so I am very thankful you are still with us. That time will come as it comes to us all.

Joanna Daniel December 9, 2016 at 12:13 AM This is one of the best, Constance:) a winner in my eyes:)

Andrea Dietrich December 8, 2016 at 6:53 PM wow, I knew you would create an awesome one with this form and theme. So good, Constance.

Doug Vinson December 7, 2016 at 11:12 PM A great write, Broken Wings, but so sad, ache flying through the void.

Alexis Y. December 7, 2016 at 12:14 PM WoW! BW, you did well with this form. It is deep and dark but well written. I could feel a deep sadness in each line. You have a style that's very much your own, I see it throughout this piece. It reads like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. A without a doubt seven-Alexis