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Duncan Macalpin Fell In Love

Duncan MacAlpin thoughts were disturbed Beauty he had seen in Crovie Had stolen his heart with one look. Her face a map of Scotland. Where would I begin to look for her? He wondered. Mercury smirked, for He had already arranged everything. In rivers, marshes, swamps, bogs, the wetlands….. Duncan blinked; had he heard his favorite Celtic deity? A shiny black kelpie seventeen hands high appeared. Standing between Duncan and the ocean. Duncan instinctively knew he had to get on his back. He had not ridden a horse since the Gallic War. Why are you hesitating? The transmigrated kelpie asked. Not in words, but in telepathy. He knew kelpies are able to manipulate your thoughts, so he hesitated a little longer, wondering who was in charge here. Did you want to see the lass again or not? The kelpie fairly flew once he was on his back. Took him to Kirkcudright where he tossed him into a flower bed. A girl came running out to see if he was all right. It was Adaira McFallen, the girl he had seen in Crovie. He could not believe it. His faith in kelpies more vivid than ever. She too worshipped the sun, moon, and stars, and believed in the transmigration of souls. A match made by Mercury.

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Date: 12/1/2020 10:54:00 PM
Very nice indeed Caren. You've handled this deftly and with finesse. You're quite the story teller. Beau travail. ;)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/1/2020 11:14:00 PM
Thank you Jim. I do love a great story!

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