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Dummy Behind the Will



This fleeting love was so
Mustang GTO
One zero zero mpg galloping flow
Past percentages said: don’t make the wrong turn
Cool convertible joyride took a cardiac slow burn,
lip swerve around the infidelity curve
Rubber denials hit the road,
asphalt inquiries touched a raw nerve
Infatuated wheels spinning out of control ... 
me thought the fantasy was real,
but the ecstasy was showroom fool’s gold
It’s a hairy situation,
my Afro instincts can feel a crash coming
Moving like an Energizer bunny,
I’m starting to feel 
like a test car strapped-in dummy
Mustang love custom GTO
Binary triple digits zooming nitro — 
Deceleration shift was a clutch much too slow,
had the top down
when my left will took an aorta puncture blow
I can hear the crash coming:
Icy surface eye contact
initiate the pain buffer airbag
Crushed lung gasp,
muffled passenger fear
How long did the unconsciousness last,
what happened to the frightened deer?
Pleasure vulnerable pulmonary lapse,
ventriloquist sound gave me backseat fear
Accidental pain motor reflex synapse ...
my unbuckled conscience got thrown clear
News flash: Another fresh love roadkill
Couldn’t avoid the crash,
even with no strings attached
Hopeful breathing went diaphragm still
for the wouldn’t dummy behind the will

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/20/2018 7:20:00 AM
Wow, how ironic...Just a few weeks ago I hit a deer with my mustang...no harm done to me and the deer managed to walk away with a few bruises as he only ran into my side panel as hit the break in the nick of time to avoid serious injuries to both of us...Great poem and well penned, Freddie...All the best!
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Date: 7/19/2018 12:29:00 PM
Loving every word.
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