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Dulcet Touch

Dulcet touch of whispered wind
As it gently blows through trees
Captured essence of lavender
From the fields growing in ease

The nestled hideaway clefted
Where she would slip away soon
To meet her secret Love Who
Would come in the cool of eve

Tranquil quiet hidden place
As she perpends His coming
Splendor of His shining face
Glory surrounds Him a glow

Radiance _ His Love excells
The scent of the roses' bloom
That wafts on the morning air
Or of the Lily's fragrant bloom

His Love exceeds love of men
Or of many maidens fair
His Love _- unconditional
I'll be joyous when he's here

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/7/2010 8:02:00 PM
Sara, your hidden love only filled with a bliss sounds so beautiful.i always enjoy reading your wishful love writes about your secret love of tranquility. if only he was here now, right. even if you are apart, the love you hold is still at piece and it lingers to be lived once more. -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 5/6/2010 8:19:00 AM
enjoyed
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Date: 5/6/2010 7:44:00 AM
Nicely done Sarah. You are a talented poet. Thanks so much for all your feedback on my poems. I do appreciate it. Joe
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Date: 5/6/2010 7:30:00 AM
Soup mail
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Date: 5/6/2010 7:21:00 AM
Gosh, this looks like it could have appeared in my contest using all those beautiful words I gave the poets over a month ago! Very nice, Sara. Oh, and I am Mormon, a religioin that teaches how we came from being spirit children to having bodies on earth as our "test" to return to God knowing truly what life is all about! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 5/6/2010 7:19:00 AM
Waited n waited....with all her desires... truely awesome write... thanks for your comment on my poem "A drinker's clowning".. love Swairik
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Date: 5/6/2010 6:47:00 AM
You received some great inspiration today, Sara. I'm imagining you sitting outside basking in nature's glory whiile composing this spiritually uplifting write. Truly God's love is unconditional and the bounty of nature reflects that love. Beautiful! Love, Carolyn
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