Duet To Pleasure

DUET TO PLEASURE B a b y... How can I get you out of my mind When It's you I only want to twine? Shall I befall to some lovers When it's you I treasure none other? B a b y... Don't play too hard to get You already know Your face and wit, I can't forget... Come, baby, come I tell you... What you can become Ocean skies to underwater trysts My baby... you got all the gifts From tantalizing green eyes To pouty cherry full lips Baby,you got me straight on bullseye Your an oasis to my desert life With you by my side, Thorns I will completely abide. Surrender to me, my desire. Keep those blushes alive And together let's duet to perspire! Entangle long on sizzling Madonna moves; Ahhh and ohhhh our dual adoring grooves As we glide in autumn memoirs of ecstasy To reach a volcanic explosion of chemistry. Interstellar prime vows uttered bright, Glowing anew as we kiss so contrite Oh, baby, won't you try to comply? Don't deny, it's I you also desire... Sunset may endow a door to endings but it's also a window to beginnings. So baby, now or never Let's start our pleasure... © October 28, 2014; 10:43 pm Carpe Diem in the form of Entreaties
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Vaso Avatar
November 2, 2014 at 8:16 PM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6jL1c05Qy9w
Vaso Avatar
November 2, 2014 at 8:12 PM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZPAmDULCVrU Hugs
Vaso Avatar
November 1, 2014 at 10:34 PM
My instrument is ready, is yours? :)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
November 2, 2014 at 8:06 PM
Aha.. :D Well, it's ready eversince... :D! :P Can we do the duets soon Buddy.. :D?! looools
Dietrich Avatar
October 30, 2014 at 8:59 PM
now that is the coolest kind of Carpe diem I can think of. VEry imaginative, sweet Olive!!! and you are right, I was really busy last night cooking pumpkin seeds and making popcorn balls four hours in the kitchen.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
October 31, 2014 at 4:42 AM
thanks much Andie for the drop by.. pumpkin seeds.. :O?! I wonder how that's done.. :)
Callus Avatar
October 30, 2014 at 12:20 PM
Love and joy flow through your spritely pen, Olive_eloi. You tantalize and seduce with simplicity and 'innocent' desire. This has been a pleasure to read. well done! // paul
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
October 30, 2014 at 8:18 PM
Thanks much PAul.. :D!!! yes that should sound like that as how I'll sound when its real simple and 'innocent' desire... :D! but not to seduce it's just stating.. :D!
Chakrabarty Avatar
October 29, 2014 at 6:13 AM
Sunset may endow a door to endings but it's also a window to beginnings So baby, now or never Let's start our pleasure... And journey begins.............Olive's magic phrases: pouty cherry full lips, sizzling Madonna,autumn memoirs of ecstasy,volcanic explosion of chemistry,Interstellar prime vows:: my fav. I am adding the poem to my fav. list. Perfect 10(7). HUGS!......RAJAT
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
October 29, 2014 at 9:35 AM
Thanks much Rajat.. Your comments are encouraging and inspiring.. :) Iwas really in a light mood when I've written this.. :D
Smith Avatar
October 28, 2014 at 10:06 PM
I was singing along Olive my sweet friend....hugs Tim
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
October 29, 2014 at 9:34 AM
Thanks Tim.. :) I can sing along with you with it.. :D hugs back.. :D!
Nance Avatar
October 28, 2014 at 9:38 PM
This is gorgeous, what a sweet sexy flow of words spilling from your fingers! I love it! 7 & fav :)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
October 29, 2014 at 9:29 AM
Thank you Cassie.. :)! God bless you and you are to with the poems you do.. :) GOD bless and hugs..
Allison Avatar
October 28, 2014 at 6:42 PM
incredible flow to this poem with wonderful imagery Olive - its seductive and sensual - great write:-) hugs jan xxx
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
October 29, 2014 at 9:28 AM
Thanks much sweet Jan.. I appreciate it.. :) hugs,.
Helppi Avatar
October 28, 2014 at 6:10 PM
I like the free written sprit of this one. Keep going Olive!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
October 29, 2014 at 3:31 AM
Thanks Dan.. I appreciate this.. :)
Fraser Avatar
October 28, 2014 at 2:31 PM
Tantalising, sensual, steamy, two to twine, on each dine, reach align, enshrined. Delightful eruption of words Olive. Another gem from you, James :)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
October 31, 2014 at 4:43 AM
hahahaha James.. :) only my seducing melody poem amd when softness meets hardness.. :) that still what i can offer.
Fraser Avatar
October 30, 2014 at 5:25 PM
If this is only light and bouncy, can't wait to read a hot lava fuelled poem, James :)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
October 29, 2014 at 3:25 AM
Thanks much mr. JAmes.. :D but this should only be light and bouncy...
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 28, 2014 at 12:32 PM
You are truly an artist of love poetry Olive. It is all so beautiful and happy without that feeling I want to cringe and close my eyes.
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
October 29, 2014 at 2:42 AM
Thanks much Brenda... :) I was feeling light hearted when I wrote this.. :D! on my light moods.. :D
Mcdaid Avatar
October 28, 2014 at 11:02 AM
very beautifully painted piece olive excellent pen
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
October 28, 2014 at 6:20 PM
thanks much Liam.. :D! I appreciate it.. :D
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