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DUET TO PLEASURE

DUET TO PLEASURE B a b y... How can I get you out of my mind When It's you I only want to twine? Shall I befall to some lovers When it's you I treasure none other? B a b y... Don't play too hard to get You already know Your face and wit, I can't forget... Come, baby, come I tell you... What you can become Ocean skies to underwater trysts My baby... you got all the gifts From tantalizing green eyes To pouty cherry full lips Baby,you got me straight on bullseye Your an oasis to my desert life With you by my side, Thorns I will completely abide. Surrender to me, my desire. Keep those blushes alive And together let's duet to perspire! Entangle long on sizzling Madonna moves; Ahhh and ohhhh our dual adoring grooves As we glide in autumn memoirs of ecstasy To reach a volcanic explosion of chemistry. Interstellar prime vows uttered bright, Glowing anew as we kiss so contrite Oh, baby, won't you try to comply? Don't deny, it's I you also desire... Sunset may endow a door to endings but it's also a window to beginnings. So baby, now or never Let's start our pleasure... © October 28, 2014; 10:43 pm Carpe Diem in the form of Entreaties

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Date: 11/2/2014 8:16:00 PM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6jL1c05Qy9w
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Date: 11/2/2014 8:12:00 PM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZPAmDULCVrU Hugs
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Date: 11/1/2014 10:34:00 PM
My instrument is ready, is yours? :)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 11/2/2014 8:06:00 PM
Aha.. :D Well, it's ready eversince... :D! :P Can we do the duets soon Buddy.. :D?! looools
Date: 10/30/2014 8:59:00 PM
now that is the coolest kind of Carpe diem I can think of. VEry imaginative, sweet Olive!!! and you are right, I was really busy last night cooking pumpkin seeds and making popcorn balls four hours in the kitchen.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/31/2014 4:42:00 AM
thanks much Andie for the drop by.. pumpkin seeds.. :O?! I wonder how that's done.. :)
Date: 10/30/2014 12:20:00 PM
Love and joy flow through your spritely pen, Olive_eloi. You tantalize and seduce with simplicity and 'innocent' desire. This has been a pleasure to read. well done! // paul
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/30/2014 8:18:00 PM
Thanks much PAul.. :D!!! yes that should sound like that as how I'll sound when its real simple and 'innocent' desire... :D! but not to seduce it's just stating.. :D!
Date: 10/29/2014 6:13:00 AM
Sunset may endow a door to endings but it's also a window to beginnings So baby, now or never Let's start our pleasure... And journey begins.............Olive's magic phrases: pouty cherry full lips, sizzling Madonna,autumn memoirs of ecstasy,volcanic explosion of chemistry,Interstellar prime vows:: my fav. I am adding the poem to my fav. list. Perfect 10(7). HUGS!......RAJAT
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/29/2014 9:35:00 AM
Thanks much Rajat.. Your comments are encouraging and inspiring.. :) Iwas really in a light mood when I've written this.. :D
Date: 10/28/2014 10:06:00 PM
I was singing along Olive my sweet friend....hugs Tim
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/29/2014 9:34:00 AM
Thanks Tim.. :) I can sing along with you with it.. :D hugs back.. :D!
Date: 10/28/2014 9:38:00 PM
This is gorgeous, what a sweet sexy flow of words spilling from your fingers! I love it! 7 & fav :)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/29/2014 9:29:00 AM
Thank you Cassie.. :)! God bless you and you are to with the poems you do.. :) GOD bless and hugs..
Date: 10/28/2014 6:42:00 PM
incredible flow to this poem with wonderful imagery Olive - its seductive and sensual - great write:-) hugs jan xxx
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/29/2014 9:28:00 AM
Thanks much sweet Jan.. I appreciate it.. :) hugs,.
Date: 10/28/2014 6:10:00 PM
I like the free written sprit of this one. Keep going Olive!
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/29/2014 3:31:00 AM
Thanks Dan.. I appreciate this.. :)
Date: 10/28/2014 2:31:00 PM
Tantalising, sensual, steamy, two to twine, on each dine, reach align, enshrined. Delightful eruption of words Olive. Another gem from you, James :)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/31/2014 4:43:00 AM
hahahaha James.. :) only my seducing melody poem amd when softness meets hardness.. :) that still what i can offer.
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James Fraser
Date: 10/30/2014 5:25:00 PM
If this is only light and bouncy, can't wait to read a hot lava fuelled poem, James :)
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/29/2014 3:25:00 AM
Thanks much mr. JAmes.. :D but this should only be light and bouncy...
Date: 10/28/2014 12:32:00 PM
You are truly an artist of love poetry Olive. It is all so beautiful and happy without that feeling I want to cringe and close my eyes.
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/29/2014 2:42:00 AM
Thanks much Brenda... :) I was feeling light hearted when I wrote this.. :D! on my light moods.. :D
Date: 10/28/2014 11:02:00 AM
very beautifully painted piece olive excellent pen
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Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/28/2014 6:20:00 PM
thanks much Liam.. :D! I appreciate it.. :D