Duckling

Duckling
Lost on a hill
Golden eyes of an owl
Frighten him to a damp chill
Quacking


Strict  Guidelines
Line 1-2 syllables is the title
Line 2-4 syllables 
Line 3-6 syllables 
Line 4-8 syllables 
Line 5- refers back to line 1


5/17/2019
9pm PST
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Krutsinger Avatar
May 18, 2019 at 3:51 AM
Ah, poor little duck; I can feel his terror. Thank you for the Cinquain lesson.
Romios Avatar
May 18, 2019 at 4:07 AM
I was exhausted and unable to complete the requirements for lines 2, 3 and 4. Will do later. Oh, the joy of an iPad. I too was frightened.Thank you. I do like Cinquains Nothing vague about them. thanks, Panagiota
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