Duck In a Dark City Lake

DUCK IN  A  DARK CITY LAKE	


Small and dark, materializing in the lake  
From the seamless blue black, the sprite  
Curved her path, leaving a gleaming wake,     
Its shimmering droplets of light    
Like a comet’s streaming tail in the night,     


A tracery glorious and ephemeral, enhanced    
With diamonds in rippling strands a-gleam     
Behind her  -  in unison they danced,      
One by one fading into the void and velvet stream -
Till her orbit’s remains were only a dream.         

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NOTE

Magnificent  beauty  is  all  around,  even in the  simplest  events,  
like   this small duck swimming in a dark lake.

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Written  2nd December  2011
Entered in Francine Roberts's  Contest  "English Quintain"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
December 19, 2011 at 6:09 AM
Congratulations on your super 10th place in Francine's "English Quintain" contest Sidney. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
December 18, 2011 at 12:22 AM
I sure remember this one, Sydney. Congrats on the winner's list. Luv, Andrea
Johnson Avatar
December 17, 2011 at 10:50 PM
Beautifuly written. An artist's eye. Love, Joyce
Roberts Avatar
December 17, 2011 at 9:23 PM
congrats on your 10th place win in the contest Sid
Dietrich Avatar
December 9, 2011 at 10:49 PM
wow, you do such beautiful poetry, and I'm so glad you enjoyed my one about letting go going into the night!
Jones Avatar
December 5, 2011 at 9:02 PM
This one had me droolin', Syd, nice job! ~N
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