Admire Shoriwa Poet Sonnet

Dry Thoughts

shivering thoughts
                                fear of a possible outcome
                                    triggering my mind
                                         coupled with anger
                                           nothing separating the two
                                       thoughts living in my mind 
                                                   like a spear
                                         piercing through my soul
                               its all about the future
                                     phobia of negative possibility

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Poet Destroyer A December 24, 2013 at 4:34 AM Admire, --Dropping by with SMILES and CHRISTMAS CHEERS. Thank You for making this a great year for ALL OF US. --- May magic fill your days and all your dreams come true this holiday season. MERRY CHRISTMAS <3 Love Linda -The Sweetest Poet Destroyer

Joseph Matose October 2, 2013 at 12:57 PM Hie Admire, hope you're fine there. What a poem. Fear is something we must fear, so they say- easier said than done. Although we must face fear, to know that it's a fearsome predator makes us face it with courage and confidence-without fear. JM (KADOMA)

Yvette Lisa Ndlovu September 22, 2013 at 4:39 AM What a lovely sonnet! The fear of failure and regret can drive us insane sometimes...love how you handled these themes. Thanks for stopping by my work...And its nice to see a fellow zimbo on PS lol will lookout for more of your work ^_^ Y.L.N