Dry Land

At the end of the day
as the large orange orb
sank into the distance
a misty pink glow
sat upon the western sky
in the stillness of the evening
where not even a whisper of wind
dared break the silence
the oppressive heat of the day
had slowly dissipated
as dusk settled cooling
the baked ground
the summer heat blanched
the grass, flowers and shrubs
wilted they hungered with thirst
clinging with hope for rain
looking to the skies with promise
a few clouds had drifted in
giving little hope to the thirsty land.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Dietrich Avatar
August 16, 2021 at 2:27 PM
Very descriptive. Yes, I bet it's about your area. We too are in a drought.
Laurie Avatar
August 8, 2021 at 10:59 PM
Hello Phyllis ... very nice verse indeed. We're the opposite right now; bleak; cold; and reminding us that is winter - thank you Phyllis - Lindsay
Rodrigues Avatar
July 29, 2021 at 3:43 AM
Nicely done, Phyllis!
Babcock Avatar
July 31, 2021 at 10:44 AM
Thank you Kim. love phyl
Andresen Avatar
July 28, 2021 at 12:22 PM
- A sad theme, beautifully described, dear Phyllis - We have rain and 16 c ... not dry land ... do not have to water the flowers :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Babcock Avatar
July 31, 2021 at 10:44 AM
We still did not get rain and getting very dry out there. Thankfully we have rain barrels to help with watering the garden which helps not having to use the tap water. love phyl
Roper Avatar
July 27, 2021 at 8:30 PM
Well written, Phyllis, so many states are thirsty for rain.
Babcock Avatar
July 31, 2021 at 10:34 AM
Thank Eve and yes it is dry in many places this year. love phyl
Merryman Avatar
July 27, 2021 at 6:35 PM
I enjoyed reading your poem, Phyl! Wonderfully descriptive. Blessings, Kim M
Babcock Avatar
July 28, 2021 at 11:56 AM
Thank you Kim. I do hope your area is not to dry this year. We have also had a very hot July which is not like us. love phyl
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