Dry Desert

Water. There's no water. Not in southern deserts. Find in a Seven Eleven. Bottled.

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Lin Lane

Date: 10/19/2023 6:33:00 AM

I see you have a great sense of humor. I’m lovin it! Wish that could be bottled.

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 10/19/2023 9:47:00 AM

Thank you. I really don't care for water. I prefer flavored drinks.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/19/2023 5:23:00 AM

Not always possible in the desert. Bottled water can easily be quickly consumed. Come to my desert and see. Blessings

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 10/19/2023 5:30:00 AM

Thanks. Some deserts do have 7-11s. I had pictured a time when I was in Gila Bend, Arizona.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/17/2023 1:35:00 AM

That's a really interesting and captivating cinquain poem, addressing the issue of water scarcity and the dimensions of dry deserts.. A very different take on the form.. Wonderfully crafted..

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 10/17/2023 6:44:00 AM

Thank you.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/16/2023 4:16:00 AM

hmm it can be so simple getting water in some parts of the world not so in others, nice thoughtful write, have a blessed day, :)

Hilda Greenhough
Date: 10/16/2023 2:28:00 PM

Thank you.