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dry

Written: September 07, 2026


dry clouds float sun blocked off and on.... weep day away
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George Avatar
September 9, 2026 at 9:08 AM
Dry clouds block the sun off and on. Do you mean that there is no chance of rain? I didn't get the meaning of 'weep day away'
Kendrick Avatar
September 9, 2026 at 12:25 PM
Valsa, I had a bad grief day that day. I guess not totally a Haiku. Thank you for dropping by. 👍⭐Sara K.
Wolf Avatar
September 8, 2026 at 9:02 PM
I like the 'dual-purpose' last line: the clouds weep and so do we. That's my take, anyway. Thanks, Sara. ~ Here's to sunshine! :) Gershon
Kendrick Avatar
September 9, 2026 at 12:26 PM
Yes, Gershon. The clouds could have wept but they did not but I did. Thank you for the visit.
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