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Drunken Moon

Life's gaze guzzler Drowning face deep in flaked soot shines waxing crescent.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 9/24/2018 6:58:00 AM
Love Haiku Poems...Trying My Hand At It...Your Very Good. Love This One!
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Date: 4/27/2017 1:53:00 AM
What an interesting idea of the moon. He's an alcoholic. Good write, Hamilton!
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Date: 4/27/2016 11:56:00 AM
Unique way to describe the moon ... the "gaze guzzler" ... very fitting, as I've stared at her many times dumbfounded.
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Date: 7/20/2015 3:35:00 PM
Did not see this in my contest... Love it... SKAT LOVE
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