Drunken Moon

Tipsy moon alit
Staring down the oceans calm
sotted through the night
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Sergi Avatar
July 5, 2015 at 7:27 PM
Thank you, Eve for the reply.
Roper Avatar
July 5, 2015 at 5:47 PM
lovely write good luck in the contest a 7 for this beauty. Hugs eve
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July 4, 2015 at 3:41 PM
Anytime Ralph, thanks for the reply
A   Avatar
July 4, 2015 at 1:22 PM
Ralph, a beautiful delight... LINDA
Sergi Avatar
July 4, 2015 at 3:35 PM
Thanks Linda
Manassian Avatar
July 4, 2015 at 1:08 PM
Very lovely, Ralph. Sotted through the line got to me. Good luck in the contest.
Sergi Avatar
July 4, 2015 at 2:34 PM
Thanks, Eileen, maybe next time
Smith Avatar
July 4, 2015 at 12:32 PM
This is really good Ralph. The contest filled quickly.
Sergi Avatar
July 5, 2015 at 7:28 PM
Thank you Tim
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July 4, 2015 at 11:52 AM
- Your image of the moon is beautiful, Ralph ! - Luck in contest ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Sergi Avatar
July 4, 2015 at 12:17 PM
Thanks , Anne Lise but I missed the contest.
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