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Drunken Moon

taunting oh the night
together move gracefully
soul destroying dawn

© Harry J Horsman 2015

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Laura Breidenthal

July 14, 2015 at 4:09 PM

ooooh.... love that last line in particular... another excellent haiku..congrats on your win! Always, Laura

Scott Thirtyseven

July 11, 2015 at 4:13 AM

There's a lot of mooning going on around here of late. Did I miss something, yet again. Glad I caught this though, nice thought provoking write. Enjoy the night.

Poet Destroyer A

July 11, 2015 at 1:03 AM

Hello Harry, Congratulations on your Drunken Moon haiku win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Bl Devnath

July 9, 2015 at 12:17 PM

Congrats my lovely friend on your win. All we are moving on with all kinds of passions from night to day and again day to night. Day starts from dawn and at the same time invites the night. Hi! genius friend, a great magic poem of few lines. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl

Daver Austin

July 9, 2015 at 10:49 AM

Yes! That moon can reach deep within.You made me close my eyes with this one, harry. Love, daver

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

July 9, 2015 at 12:39 AM

Congrats on ur awesome winning haiku harry!

Casarah Nance

July 8, 2015 at 6:32 PM

Mmm very dark but yet beautifully compelling, nicely done!

Paul Callus

July 8, 2015 at 10:22 AM

Congratulations on a fine and deserved win, Harry! Another delightful haiku; great ending line, too. #7 // paul

Tim Smith

July 8, 2015 at 9:13 AM

Very deep Harry....congratulations

Richard Lamoureux

July 8, 2015 at 8:18 AM

Well expressed, congrats!

John Lawless

July 8, 2015 at 7:00 AM

Congrats on the win Harry.

Connie Marcum Wong

July 8, 2015 at 4:57 AM

Excellent Harry. Big congrats on your wonderful win!

Jan Allison

July 8, 2015 at 2:29 AM

great win Harry - congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

July 7, 2015 at 11:39 PM

Harry, it is so great to see you in a contest and winning high. BIG congrats to you.

Viv Wigley

July 7, 2015 at 11:31 PM

Nice one, Harry, well done. Regards, Viv

Lee Carter

July 7, 2015 at 11:10 PM

Great drunken moon Harry congrats!

Skat A

July 7, 2015 at 10:43 PM

Hi Harry, this is deep, the way I love my haiku. Congratulations, on your awesome Drunken Moon win... Thank you for supporting this contest... **SKAT**