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Pandita Sietesantos

Drunken Moon

Drunken Moon

the drunken moon spots 
its own reflection and thinks… 
earth’s tipsy again 


07-03-2015

Contest:      Drunken Moon Contest
Sponsor:     SKAT A
Placement:  6th

Copyright © Pandita Sietesantos | Year Posted 2015

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May 9, 2017 at 4:04 PM

I love this one, Pandita. I know it's an older one of yours, but am only just reading it. Excellent Haiku! I understand you had a high placement, so congratulations! Regards, John.

Pandita Sietesantos

May 10, 2017 at 8:22 AM

This one always tickles me! John, thank you so much for your wonderful continued support! Best wishes. Pandita

July 12, 2015 at 6:35 AM

The moon has enough incite to know! I have always thought we live in the lunar age--or perhaps the looney age.

Pandita Sietesantos

July 12, 2015 at 9:41 PM

Tehehe - true at times it does appear that we live in a "looney age!" And the moon, who has seen it all over the centuries, can't believe all the lunacy we human beings have been up to:-)! Warmest regards. Pandita

Poet Destroyer A

July 11, 2015 at 1:10 AM

Pandita, Congratulations on your Drunken Moon haiku win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Pandita Sietesantos

July 11, 2015 at 5:26 PM

Thank you so very much, my friend for your wonderful compliments! Hope you are enjoying the weekend! Pandita

July 11, 2015 at 12:10 AM

Hi Pandita, just swinging back to offer big congratulations to you on a sweet win! Kika

Pandita Sietesantos

July 11, 2015 at 12:25 AM

Many thanks, my friend for your kind congratulations which I so very much appreciate! All the best. Pandita

July 10, 2015 at 5:43 PM

A clever Haiku, Pandita. LOL

Pandita Sietesantos

July 10, 2015 at 11:28 PM

Cona, thank you so much for stopping by and complimenting this piece - glad you enjoyed it too! Pandita

Richard Lamoureux

July 9, 2015 at 7:03 AM

Ha ha, clever one! Congrats Pandita.

Pandita Sietesantos

July 9, 2015 at 8:25 AM

I really had a lot of fun with this one and I am so glad you enjoyed it! Thanks, Rick! Have a great day! Pandita

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

July 9, 2015 at 1:18 AM

Congrats on ur winning haiku Pandita!

Pandita Sietesantos

July 9, 2015 at 8:24 AM

Thank you so very much, my friend for your wonderful compliments! Have a beautiful day! Pandita

July 8, 2015 at 12:44 PM

Back with congratulations, Pandita. On a second reading I confirm my initial high rating:) // paul

Pandita Sietesantos

July 8, 2015 at 8:56 PM

Thank you, thank you Paul for your repeat visit and high compliments which I greatly appreciate!! Have a restful night! Pandita

July 8, 2015 at 4:14 AM

made me smile congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Pandita Sietesantos

July 8, 2015 at 6:57 AM

This was an especially fun piece! Thanks, Jan for your kind words! I wish you had submitted an entry for this contest because I am sure that yours would have appeared on the winners list as well. All the best! Pandita

July 8, 2015 at 12:56 AM

Pandita,this piece rocks! Congratulations on your win:-) Alexis

Pandita Sietesantos

July 8, 2015 at 6:59 AM

I am so happy you enjoyed this piece, Alexis! Thank you for your kind compliments, my friend! Pandita

Andrea Dietrich

July 7, 2015 at 11:50 PM

what a very creative thought in this one. Congrats for your win, Pandita.

Pandita Sietesantos

July 8, 2015 at 6:58 AM

I had great fun putting this one together! Thank you so much Andrea for your congratulations! Warmest regards. Pandita

July 7, 2015 at 11:46 PM

Still makes me smile... congratulations Pandita. Viv

Pandita Sietesantos

July 8, 2015 at 6:55 AM

Awww! Thank you so very much Vivi, for visiting and complimenting this piece. I really appreciate it! Warmest regards. Pandita

July 7, 2015 at 11:35 PM

Congrats great drunken moon!

Pandita Sietesantos

July 8, 2015 at 6:54 AM

Hi Lee, I am very happy that you enjoyed this one! All the best. Pandita

July 7, 2015 at 11:02 PM

Pandita, Congratulations, on your awesome Drunken Moon win... Thank you for supporting this contest... **SKAT**

Pandita Sietesantos

July 8, 2015 at 6:53 AM

Hi SKAT A, it was great fun and I am delighted you like this piece and that you placed it on your winners list! Thank you, thank you! Pandita

Shadow Hamilton

July 7, 2015 at 7:37 PM

clever and lovely Pandita gl in contest hugs

Pandita Sietesantos

July 7, 2015 at 9:44 PM

Hi Shadow, I am so happy you enjoyed this piece! Thank you for your kind compliments, my friend! Pandita

July 6, 2015 at 8:46 PM

Brilliant ideal for Haiku, Pandita. Agape, Moses

Pandita Sietesantos

July 6, 2015 at 10:30 PM

Hi John, I am so glad you stopped by and left your wonderful compliments! Warmest regards. Pandita

Milton Robertson

July 6, 2015 at 7:09 AM

Good one, In that state all seems well.

Pandita Sietesantos

July 6, 2015 at 3:57 PM

Hi Milton, I am very happy that you enjoyed this one! All the best. Pandita

Connie Marcum Wong

July 6, 2015 at 2:44 AM

How unique and creative is this haiku Pandita. I love it! 7

Pandita Sietesantos

July 6, 2015 at 3:56 PM

It's good to hear from you, Connie, and thank you for the high praises! Have a nice day! Pandita

July 5, 2015 at 11:56 PM

Hi Pandita, this is so playful and clever. Nice write! P.S. thank you for the comment earlier. xoxo

Pandita Sietesantos

July 6, 2015 at 3:54 PM

Thank you so very much Lycia, for visiting and complimenting this piece. I really appreciate it! Warmest regards. Pandita

July 5, 2015 at 6:04 PM

Beautiful imagery Hugs Eve

Pandita Sietesantos

July 5, 2015 at 7:07 PM

Many thanks, dear Eve, I always enjoy hearing from you! Pandita

July 5, 2015 at 5:19 PM

Oh this is so clever,, love it

Pandita Sietesantos

July 5, 2015 at 7:06 PM

Hi Harry, I am so happy you enjoyed this piece! Thank you for your kind compliments, my friend! Pandita

Ravi Sathasivam

July 5, 2015 at 2:59 AM

Lovely haiku. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

Pandita Sietesantos

July 5, 2015 at 7:05 PM

Thank you so very much Ravi, for visiting and complimenting this piece. I really appreciate it! Warmest regards. Pandita

July 4, 2015 at 11:25 PM

Wow, after last night, I too was sure the earth was tipsy again!!!

Pandita Sietesantos

July 5, 2015 at 7:04 PM

I wonder what you were up to? Cheers ! lol.Thanks for stopping by, my friend! Pandita

July 4, 2015 at 8:44 AM

I love this witty drunken moon haiku, Pandita!! I wrote one on the same lines; perhaps I ought to change it. gl in the contest. // paul

Pandita Sietesantos

July 4, 2015 at 2:37 PM

I am so happy you enjoyed this one, Paul! Please do not change yours - our pieces are not that similar and yours is great the way it is! Warmest regards. Pandita

Poet Destroyer A

July 4, 2015 at 1:09 AM

Pandita, love it, everybody get tipsy:):):) A nice way to SPIN the night. LOL, get it SPIN. :) LINDA

Pandita Sietesantos

July 4, 2015 at 2:10 AM

Teheheh:-) Love your comment, Linda! Have a happy Fourth of July! Pandita

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