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Drunken Moon

Drunken Moon the drunken moon spots its own reflection and thinks… earth’s tipsy again 07-03-2015 Contest: Drunken Moon Contest Sponsor: SKAT A Placement: 6th

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John Michaels

Date: 5/9/2017 4:04:00 PM

I love this one, Pandita. I know it's an older one of yours, but am only just reading it. Excellent Haiku! I understand you had a high placement, so congratulations! Regards, John.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/10/2017 8:22:00 AM

This one always tickles me! John, thank you so much for your wonderful continued support! Best wishes. Pandita

Duke Beaufort

Date: 7/12/2015 6:35:00 AM

The moon has enough incite to know! I have always thought we live in the lunar age--or perhaps the looney age.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/12/2015 9:41:00 PM

Tehehe - true at times it does appear that we live in a "looney age!" And the moon, who has seen it all over the centuries, can't believe all the lunacy we human beings have been up to:-)! Warmest regards. Pandita

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/11/2015 1:10:00 AM

Pandita, Congratulations on your Drunken Moon haiku win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/11/2015 5:26:00 PM

Thank you so very much, my friend for your wonderful compliments! Hope you are enjoying the weekend! Pandita

Kika Ayala

Date: 7/11/2015 12:10:00 AM

Hi Pandita, just swinging back to offer big congratulations to you on a sweet win! Kika

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/11/2015 12:25:00 AM

Many thanks, my friend for your kind congratulations which I so very much appreciate! All the best. Pandita

Cona Adams

Date: 7/10/2015 5:43:00 PM

A clever Haiku, Pandita. LOL

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/10/2015 11:28:00 PM

Cona, thank you so much for stopping by and complimenting this piece - glad you enjoyed it too! Pandita

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/9/2015 7:03:00 AM

Ha ha, clever one! Congrats Pandita.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/9/2015 8:25:00 AM

I really had a lot of fun with this one and I am so glad you enjoyed it! Thanks, Rick! Have a great day! Pandita

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/9/2015 1:18:00 AM

Congrats on ur winning haiku Pandita!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/9/2015 8:24:00 AM

Thank you so very much, my friend for your wonderful compliments! Have a beautiful day! Pandita

Paul Callus

Date: 7/8/2015 12:44:00 PM

Back with congratulations, Pandita. On a second reading I confirm my initial high rating:) // paul

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/8/2015 8:56:00 PM

Thank you, thank you Paul for your repeat visit and high compliments which I greatly appreciate!! Have a restful night! Pandita

Jan Allison

Date: 7/8/2015 4:14:00 AM

made me smile congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/8/2015 6:57:00 AM

This was an especially fun piece! Thanks, Jan for your kind words! I wish you had submitted an entry for this contest because I am sure that yours would have appeared on the winners list as well. All the best! Pandita

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/8/2015 12:56:00 AM

Pandita,this piece rocks! Congratulations on your win:-) Alexis

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/8/2015 6:59:00 AM

I am so happy you enjoyed this piece, Alexis! Thank you for your kind compliments, my friend! Pandita

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/7/2015 11:50:00 PM

what a very creative thought in this one. Congrats for your win, Pandita.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/8/2015 6:58:00 AM

I had great fun putting this one together! Thank you so much Andrea for your congratulations! Warmest regards. Pandita

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/7/2015 11:46:00 PM

Still makes me smile... congratulations Pandita. Viv

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/8/2015 6:55:00 AM

Awww! Thank you so very much Vivi, for visiting and complimenting this piece. I really appreciate it! Warmest regards. Pandita

Lee Carter

Date: 7/7/2015 11:35:00 PM

Congrats great drunken moon!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/8/2015 6:54:00 AM

Hi Lee, I am very happy that you enjoyed this one! All the best. Pandita

Skat A

Date: 7/7/2015 11:02:00 PM

Pandita, Congratulations, on your awesome Drunken Moon win... Thank you for supporting this contest... **SKAT**

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/8/2015 6:53:00 AM

Hi SKAT A, it was great fun and I am delighted you like this piece and that you placed it on your winners list! Thank you, thank you! Pandita

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 7/7/2015 7:37:00 PM

clever and lovely Pandita gl in contest hugs

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/7/2015 9:44:00 PM

Hi Shadow, I am so happy you enjoyed this piece! Thank you for your kind compliments, my friend! Pandita

John Freeman

Date: 7/6/2015 8:46:00 PM

Brilliant ideal for Haiku, Pandita. Agape, Moses

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/6/2015 10:30:00 PM

Hi John, I am so glad you stopped by and left your wonderful compliments! Warmest regards. Pandita

Milton Robertson

Date: 7/6/2015 7:09:00 AM

Good one, In that state all seems well.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/6/2015 3:57:00 PM

Hi Milton, I am very happy that you enjoyed this one! All the best. Pandita

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/6/2015 2:44:00 AM

How unique and creative is this haiku Pandita. I love it! 7

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/6/2015 3:56:00 PM

It's good to hear from you, Connie, and thank you for the high praises! Have a nice day! Pandita

Lycia Harding

Date: 7/5/2015 11:56:00 PM

Hi Pandita, this is so playful and clever. Nice write! P.S. thank you for the comment earlier. xoxo

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/6/2015 3:54:00 PM

Thank you so very much Lycia, for visiting and complimenting this piece. I really appreciate it! Warmest regards. Pandita

Eve Roper

Date: 7/5/2015 6:04:00 PM

Beautiful imagery Hugs Eve

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/5/2015 7:07:00 PM

Many thanks, dear Eve, I always enjoy hearing from you! Pandita

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/5/2015 5:19:00 PM

Oh this is so clever,, love it

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/5/2015 7:06:00 PM

Hi Harry, I am so happy you enjoyed this piece! Thank you for your kind compliments, my friend! Pandita

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 7/5/2015 2:59:00 AM

Lovely haiku. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/5/2015 7:05:00 PM

Thank you so very much Ravi, for visiting and complimenting this piece. I really appreciate it! Warmest regards. Pandita

Arthur Vaso

Date: 7/4/2015 11:25:00 PM

Wow, after last night, I too was sure the earth was tipsy again!!!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/5/2015 7:04:00 PM

I wonder what you were up to? Cheers ! lol.Thanks for stopping by, my friend! Pandita

Paul Callus

Date: 7/4/2015 8:44:00 AM

I love this witty drunken moon haiku, Pandita!! I wrote one on the same lines; perhaps I ought to change it. gl in the contest. // paul

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/4/2015 2:37:00 PM

I am so happy you enjoyed this one, Paul! Please do not change yours - our pieces are not that similar and yours is great the way it is! Warmest regards. Pandita

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/4/2015 1:09:00 AM

Pandita, love it, everybody get tipsy:):):) A nice way to SPIN the night. LOL, get it SPIN. :) LINDA

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/4/2015 2:10:00 AM

Teheheh:-) Love your comment, Linda! Have a happy Fourth of July! Pandita