Drunken Moon

moon lolls on the sea admiring its reflection drunk with vanity
~Abdul Malik, 7/2/15 ~Drunken Moon contest by SKAT A
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A   Avatar
July 11, 2015 at 1:13 AM
nice win
Lamoureux Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 8:50 AM
For me one of the best, very creative!
Mandani Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 10:25 AM
Me too! Thanks Richard.
A. Sharma Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 1:29 AM
Congrats Abdul,, nice haiku n win!
Smith Avatar
July 8, 2015 at 3:08 PM
Very nice moon haiku...congrats Tim
Callus Avatar
July 8, 2015 at 1:34 PM
I love this haiku, Abdul!! Your take on the theme is great, especially that concluding line! #7 Congratulations!! // paul
Mandani Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 10:25 AM
Thanks Paul. You did pretty good yourself. I like yours better.
Dietrich Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 11:58 PM
loved it before, and love it now. Congrats on your win
Wigley Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 11:55 PM
Well done, Abdul- nice one. Regards, Viv
Carter Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 11:47 PM
Congrats love your drunken moon!
A  Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 11:10 PM
Abdul, Congratulations, on your awesome Drunken Moon win... Thank you for supporting this contest... **SKAT**
A   Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 5:58 PM
WOW, that is awesome...@-> LINDA <-@
Dietrich Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 2:08 PM
ahhh, MY kind of haiku!!!
Mandani Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 5:44 PM
You got it, it's yours!
Carter Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 12:05 PM
Oh love this! Good luck : )
Mandani Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 12:12 PM
Thanks Lee - (Bruce Lee?!)
Hunjeri Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 11:49 AM
Beautiful! All the best in the contest
Mandani Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 11:58 AM
Thanks beautiful!
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