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Drunken Moon

moon lolls on the sea
admiring its reflection
drunk with vanity


~Abdul Malik, 7/2/15
~Drunken Moon contest by SKAT A

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/11/2015 1:13:00 AM

nice win

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/9/2015 8:50:00 AM

For me one of the best, very creative!

Abdul Malik
Date: 7/9/2015 10:25:00 AM

Me too! Thanks Richard.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/9/2015 1:29:00 AM

Congrats Abdul,, nice haiku n win!

Tim Smith

Date: 7/8/2015 3:08:00 PM

Very nice moon haiku...congrats Tim

Paul Callus

Date: 7/8/2015 1:34:00 PM

I love this haiku, Abdul!! Your take on the theme is great, especially that concluding line! #7 Congratulations!! // paul

Abdul Malik
Date: 7/9/2015 10:25:00 AM

Thanks Paul. You did pretty good yourself. I like yours better.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/7/2015 11:58:00 PM

loved it before, and love it now. Congrats on your win

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/7/2015 11:55:00 PM

Well done, Abdul- nice one. Regards, Viv

Lee Carter

Date: 7/7/2015 11:47:00 PM

Congrats love your drunken moon!

Skat A

Date: 7/7/2015 11:10:00 PM

Abdul, Congratulations, on your awesome Drunken Moon win... Thank you for supporting this contest... **SKAT**

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/3/2015 5:58:00 PM

WOW, that is awesome...@-> LINDA <-@

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/3/2015 2:08:00 PM

ahhh, MY kind of haiku!!!

Abdul Malik
Date: 7/3/2015 5:44:00 PM

You got it, it's yours!

Lee Carter

Date: 7/3/2015 12:05:00 PM

Oh love this! Good luck : )

Abdul Malik
Date: 7/3/2015 12:12:00 PM

Thanks Lee - (Bruce Lee?!)

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 7/3/2015 11:49:00 AM

Beautiful! All the best in the contest

Abdul Malik
Date: 7/3/2015 11:58:00 AM

Thanks beautiful!

Drunken Moon

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