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Drunken Moon

orange ball of sky
a wondrous twirl in a dance---
moonlight rock and roll



For Skat,  Drunken Moon
Carly Lalion, 4 Jul 2015

dancemoonhaiku

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Poet Destroyer A

July 11, 2015 at 1:10 AM

Carly, Congratulations on your Drunken Moon haiku win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Richard Lamoureux

July 9, 2015 at 7:02 AM

I enjoyed your winning poem!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

July 9, 2015 at 1:17 AM

Wonderful haiku Carly! Congrats on big win!

Andrea Dietrich

July 7, 2015 at 11:50 PM

another one I liked so much from before. BIG congrats

Viv Wigley

July 7, 2015 at 11:45 PM

This really swings! Congratulations, Carly. Viv x

Lee Carter

July 7, 2015 at 11:33 PM

Love this great last line! Congrats

Skat A

July 7, 2015 at 11:02 PM

Carly, Congratulations, on your awesome Drunken Moon win... Thank you for supporting this contest... **SKAT**

Nette Onclaud

July 4, 2015 at 6:02 AM

true, the moon rocks and rolls... what a delightful prnace.. thanks for your supportive comments.. huggs

Poet Destroyer A

July 3, 2015 at 5:59 PM

Carly, this is perfect. love the dancing move...@-> LINDA <-@

Andrea Dietrich

July 3, 2015 at 2:09 PM

very pretty picture!!!

Drunken Moon

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