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Drunken Moon

Blood moon hurls moon rock Missed earth's surface this fool moon A looney eclipse Thabang Jan Ngoma 07-03-2015 Sponsor: SKAT A Contest Name: Drunken Moon contest (may the best drunken moon HAIKU WIN)

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/11/2015 1:06:00 AM

Thabang, Congratulations on your Drunken Moon haiku win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/10/2015 9:32:00 AM

It's not a haiku but it's well expressed none the less.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/9/2015 8:57:00 AM

This is a fun one, congrats.

Thabang Ngoma
Date: 7/10/2015 9:09:00 AM

Hi Richard...yes, I had such fun, wasn't even sure if it was a Haiku...cheers, Tbang

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/9/2015 1:35:00 AM

Lovely expressions Thabang! Congrats on ur superb win!

Thabang Ngoma
Date: 7/10/2015 9:11:00 AM

Hi Dr. Sharma...thank you and congrats on your outstanding win...rgds, Tbang

Tim Smith

Date: 7/8/2015 2:57:00 PM

I like the imagery of being lonely...congrats Tim

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 7/8/2015 10:45:00 AM

A wonderful imagery you have penned down! Congrats for your WIN Thabang! ;-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/8/2015 12:03:00 AM

love that looney eclipse line. Congrats for win

Thabang Ngoma
Date: 7/10/2015 9:14:00 AM

Hi Andrea...this was a fun contest, although Haiku is concerned with more serious forms of expression...thanks & congrats on your win...rgds, Tbang

Lee Carter

Date: 7/8/2015 12:00:00 AM

Lol... Cute! Congrats on your win!

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/7/2015 11:59:00 PM

Like the wordplay, Thabang, and well done on your first efforts in this form. You will get to love it. Regards, Viv

Thabang Ngoma
Date: 7/10/2015 9:18:00 AM

Hi Viv...thank you, yes this is something new I'm learning and congrats on your take in the contest...rgds, Tbang

Skat A

Date: 7/7/2015 11:14:00 PM

Thbang, Congratulations, on your awesome Drunken Moon win... Thank you for supporting this contest... **SKAT**

Thabang Ngoma
Date: 7/10/2015 9:20:00 AM

Hi Skatie...you made this contest such fun, wasn't sure if perhaps I've made the Haiku too comical or if it was even Haiku anymore...thanks & God bless, Tbang