Thabang Ngoma Poet Haiku

Drunken Moon

Blood moon hurls moon rock
Missed earth's surface this fool moon
A looney eclipse 


Thabang Jan Ngoma
07-03-2015

Sponsor: SKAT A 
Contest Name: Drunken Moon contest (may the best drunken moon HAIKU WIN)

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Poet Destroyer A July 11, 2015 at 1:06 AM Thabang, Congratulations on your Drunken Moon haiku win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Richard Lamoureux July 10, 2015 at 9:32 AM It's not a haiku but it's well expressed none the less.

Richard Lamoureux July 9, 2015 at 8:57 AM This is a fun one, congrats. Thabang Ngoma July 10, 2015 at 9:09 AM Hi Richard...yes, I had such fun, wasn't even sure if it was a Haiku...cheers, Tbang

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 9, 2015 at 1:35 AM Lovely expressions Thabang! Congrats on ur superb win! Thabang Ngoma July 10, 2015 at 9:11 AM Hi Dr. Sharma...thank you and congrats on your outstanding win...rgds, Tbang

Tim Smith July 8, 2015 at 2:57 PM I like the imagery of being lonely...congrats Tim

Teddy Kimathi July 8, 2015 at 10:45 AM A wonderful imagery you have penned down! Congrats for your WIN Thabang! ;-)

Andrea Dietrich July 8, 2015 at 12:03 AM love that looney eclipse line. Congrats for win Thabang Ngoma July 10, 2015 at 9:14 AM Hi Andrea...this was a fun contest, although Haiku is concerned with more serious forms of expression...thanks & congrats on your win...rgds, Tbang

Lee Carter July 8, 2015 at 12:00 AM Lol... Cute! Congrats on your win!

Viv Wigley July 7, 2015 at 11:59 PM Like the wordplay, Thabang, and well done on your first efforts in this form. You will get to love it. Regards, Viv Thabang Ngoma July 10, 2015 at 9:18 AM Hi Viv...thank you, yes this is something new I'm learning and congrats on your take in the contest...rgds, Tbang

Skat A July 7, 2015 at 11:14 PM Thbang, Congratulations, on your awesome Drunken Moon win... Thank you for supporting this contest... **SKAT** Thabang Ngoma July 10, 2015 at 9:20 AM Hi Skatie...you made this contest such fun, wasn't sure if perhaps I've made the Haiku too comical or if it was even Haiku anymore...thanks & God bless, Tbang

Eve Roper July 5, 2015 at 6:26 PM Love your humor, a 7 and good luck in the contest. Hugs eve Thabang Ngoma July 5, 2015 at 7:15 PM Hi Eve...thank u, a very interesting contest for a sophisticated form..cheers, Tbang

Poet Destroyer A July 3, 2015 at 6:00 PM awesome@-> LINDA <-@ Thabang Ngoma July 3, 2015 at 9:35 PM Thanks Linda...not a very easy style, hey...cheers, Tbang

Andrea Dietrich July 3, 2015 at 2:26 PM Cool 'KU Thabang Ngoma July 3, 2015 at 9:43 PM Hi Andrea...learning a new form (learning Japanese) lol..very compact / technical with the syllable count, but fun contest..cheers, Tbang