Drunken Moon

curly sea dragon
               drifting under the moon wave
      swallows vanity


I. Cantu
7-3-15
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Guzzi Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 9:43 PM
Nice to enjoy your three line verse this evening. Light & Love
A   Avatar
July 11, 2015 at 1:08 AM
Israel, Congratulations on your Drunken Moon haiku win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Lamoureux Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 6:52 AM
I enjoyed your winning poem!
A. Sharma Avatar
July 9, 2015 at 1:10 AM
Wonderful haiku Israel! Congrats on ur win!
Dietrich Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 11:46 PM
wow, this one is DEEP!! Congrats for the win, I really like yours.
Wigley Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 11:40 PM
Congratulations, Israel, nicely done. Regards, Viv
Carter Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 11:23 PM
Great drunken moon congrats!
A  Avatar
July 7, 2015 at 11:00 PM
LOL, love the curly sea dragon imagery. Reminds me of a fisherman's tale. Israel Congratulations, on your awesome Drunken Moon win... Thank you for supporting this contest... **SKAT**
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July 3, 2015 at 4:28 AM
Very attractive imagery. All the best in the contest.
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July 3, 2015 at 2:55 AM
Israel, I like the curly dragon on the sea. Reminds me of Nassie from Scotland. :) Enjoying your entry. It's got its own vanity fair. So who could ever see a reflection and not encounter beauty. ~Always & Forever~ LINDA
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