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Drunken Moon

my soul gets a buzz
every time I drink the moon…
  eyes sipping moonshine

          David Mohn
          03 Jul 2015

moonhaiku

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Matthew Anish

Date: 7/12/2015 12:01:00 AM

Nice images here! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/11/2015 1:13:00 AM

David, Congratulations on your Drunken Moon haiku win. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/9/2015 8:51:00 AM

This is perfect! I am impressed! Congrats.

Funom Makama

Date: 7/9/2015 6:32:00 AM

This is an awesome write. I appreciate the true message of your candid expression.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 7/9/2015 1:30:00 AM

Wonderful haiku David,, one of the best entries,, congrats on ur win!

Tim Smith

Date: 7/8/2015 3:07:00 PM

I like the romance aspect David....congrats Tim

Paul Callus

Date: 7/8/2015 1:36:00 PM

Hi David! Sipping that moonshine is more than enough to impress me! Lovely haiku! Congrats on your fine win. // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/7/2015 11:58:00 PM

still one of my faves in this contest. Congrats on the winner list.

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/7/2015 11:55:00 PM

Well done, David, nice Haiku. Regards, Viv

Lee Carter

Date: 7/7/2015 11:49:00 PM

Eyes sipping moonshine Love it! your drunken moon is great congrats

Skat A

Date: 7/7/2015 11:11:00 PM

David, Congratulations, on your awesome Drunken Moon win... Thank you for supporting this contest... **SKAT**

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/3/2015 1:44:00 PM

WOWOWOW, best one I've seen YET

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 7/3/2015 3:59:00 AM

Nice one:-) all the best in the contest David.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/3/2015 2:59:00 AM

LOL, Sipping moonshine. A clever haiku. I would have never thought of using moonshine.. Good luck in the contest ~Always & Forever~ LINDA

Drunken Moon

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