Drunken Moon

*Through the fog*


Tide in a bottle
the sun of night gives me light
smoke and loneliness


Kelvin McLaughlin
03/July/2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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July 10, 2015 at 10:15 AM
I'm glad I came across this superb haiku! Well done and I rate it a 7! Warmest regards. Pandita
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July 2, 2015 at 10:03 PM
Hi, Kelvin.... Amazing entry. I never stopped to wonder about the bottles drifting emotions. This is a deep entry... Good luck. .. Linda
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