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DRUNKEN MOON

*Through the fog* Tide in a bottle the sun of night gives me light smoke and loneliness Kelvin McLaughlin 03/July/2015

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Date: 7/10/2015 10:15:00 AM
I'm glad I came across this superb haiku! Well done and I rate it a 7! Warmest regards. Pandita
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Date: 7/2/2015 10:03:00 PM
Hi, Kelvin.... Amazing entry. I never stopped to wonder about the bottles drifting emotions. This is a deep entry... Good luck. .. Linda
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