Drunken Moon

~ Injustice Moon Among Us ~


deeper than twilight
the moon to moon afterglow
a wave crush the mood
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Stereotype motion
Two face under water 
Human injury 


(Senryu of Being Misjudged)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Novio Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 3:37 AM
It's really not what we see but how we see. Engaging.
Imtiaz Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 2:23 AM
true
U.D Palawon  Avatar
June 28, 2016 at 12:46 PM
Nice..you express things so well in little words..I find this form very challenging! :D
Gazbowski Avatar
May 14, 2016 at 5:12 PM
innit great to be human !
Bosa Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 3:30 PM
Superb! I can see now, why you recommended this form. :-))))
Raven Avatar
February 13, 2016 at 7:30 PM
Hi Linda, isn't it many times we are misjudged by our actions. This Senryu shall does say it all Linda. A thought provoking write written by a golden pen. I find these shorter forms very difficult Linda but you seem to master them well. A seven for this Senryu, Love Vlad.
Dunn Avatar
September 16, 2015 at 10:42 PM
Dear Linda Love the moon imagery my dear friend, I'm almost caught all the way up with you, so lets finish this wonderment of inspirational work of my Linda the destroyer lol, this is great and I do love the first verse the best very inspirational, cheri
Petersen Potter Avatar
September 4, 2015 at 6:53 PM
Excellent pen Linda! A very deep Senryu duet, you've painted here in this drunken moon piece.A 7!And thank you Linda so much for visiting my page and all very much I appreciate it my friend:)In his light, God bless you!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!:) D
Frey Avatar
August 27, 2015 at 12:46 PM
Love this one, last two lines are just delightful
Nau Avatar
August 13, 2015 at 2:37 AM
Yes this poem is like quicksilver...it moves when you try to touch it!
Dye Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 5:05 PM
totally true2 @ one of the best poems I have ever read awesome @ thank u
Boddie Avatar
July 31, 2015 at 10:37 AM
interesting selection....this belongs in the thought provoking section....two face under water, human injury....that touches in many ways but most of all furiously....
A. Sharma Avatar
July 28, 2015 at 12:31 AM
Awesome pen PD n a superb win ! Big congrats!
Devnath  Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 3:27 PM
A great congrats on POTW my lovely *friend. Loved always,bl
K. Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 9:47 AM
This write of yours made me think, pd-- of several scenarios, and I like that. This is something I think I'd go back to and try to read into it again and get something else entirely the next time around. How are you? The kids and grandkids? I hope you have a great week ahead, summer over there already, right <3 --me just being a mushroom here, as usual
Gasun Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 9:28 AM
Hello everdearest sis and BFF of mine! Stopping by to enjoy once again this superb haiku of yours and to extend my heartfelt congratulations on your win!Many hugs and cheers! Thank you so much again for sharing and, may I also have this chance dearest sis of mine to thank you for giving special time/day for my poems. My heart was fattened and I'm so touched by your thoughtfulness, loving gestures and wonderful words (tears of joy). You're still my BEST. I love and miss you much. forever, Leo
Hunjeri Avatar
July 26, 2015 at 3:57 AM
congrats Linda. this is a great win. good day
Y. Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 10:48 PM
PD, I just stopped by to say congratulations on your awesome win:-)Alexis
Sietesantos Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 10:07 PM
Congratulations, dear Linda, on your excellent win for this wonderful Senryu! Love, Pandita
A  Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 4:50 PM
Sweet & Sweet :) Sid
Arowolo Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 3:44 PM
Beautiful piece,great poetess. Congrats on your lovely win in this contest.....
Delaney Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 3:35 PM
Congratulations on your beautiful win. Your insight is amazing. SuZ
Roper Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 11:29 AM
I love the impact you have presented in this poem. Congratulations on your win a seven. Hugs Eve
Nunez Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 10:31 AM
Congratulations, Linda! hugs
Celestial Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 10:14 AM
one of the best! Congratz!
Allison Avatar
July 24, 2015 at 8:24 AM
a powerful write Linda congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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