Joseph May Poet Rictameter

Drum Beat

Drum beat
  The sound of hearts
Beating to love's smooth rhythm
Sometimes a  brokenhearted  tune
  Hoping for another chance at love's oft
 Moody melodic emotions
That dance upon  lyrics,  
   The beat goes on...
  Drum beat
         ~

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Jeremy Smith May 9, 2017 at 9:54 PM This is really good Joseph, nice work!!

Jeremy Smith May 7, 2017 at 8:08 PM This is really good! Nice job!!

Andrea Dietrich October 28, 2013 at 4:02 PM reviewing this sweet poem again. thanks for always taking time to comment to me.

Sara Kendrick April 22, 2013 at 5:06 PM Great work that has been honored in Andrea's Favs.Congrats..Sara

Carol Eastman April 22, 2013 at 11:14 AM Congratulations on such a well deserved win.

Modupe Sefunmi April 21, 2013 at 7:19 AM Love this, Joseph! I will fav it as well. Congrats on your win!

Donna Jones April 20, 2013 at 7:07 AM Love it Joseph...congratulations

Poet Destroyer A April 19, 2013 at 9:37 PM Joseph, Congratulations IN HONOR OF Andrea's favorite POEM contest. *Always & Forever' @->- LINDA -<-@

Skat A April 19, 2013 at 8:30 PM Joseph, a sweet win~*~SKAT

Delysia Hendricks April 19, 2013 at 8:15 PM Congratulations on your awesome win in Andrea's "fave poem" contest. Good poetry, Joseph. I like. :)

Len Gasun April 19, 2013 at 8:04 PM Many congrats my dear friend Joseph! This is indeed great and amazing! It's also true. I love it & so enjoyed. Thank you so much for sharing! Have a grace-filled day! Love and hugs, Leonora

Carol Sunshine Brown August 16, 2012 at 6:57 AM Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Second Chance" contest Joseph. Sorry for the belated congratulations but so much going on at this time. Love, Carol

Terry O'Leary August 14, 2012 at 10:09 AM Very nice... Congratulations on your win... Terry

Olusegun Arowolo August 13, 2012 at 6:31 AM Congratulations on your win,Joseph.This is splendid. Joseph May August 13, 2012 at 10:40 AM thank you Olusegun

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl August 13, 2012 at 4:35 AM Congratulations Joseph xx Joseph May August 13, 2012 at 10:40 AM thank you Mandy

David Williams August 13, 2012 at 1:55 AM Joseph congrats on your win..David Joseph May August 13, 2012 at 10:39 AM thank you David

Poet Destroyer A August 13, 2012 at 1:46 AM JOSEPH...congratulations with your awesome second chance poem. Thank you for the support..luv~PD Joseph May August 13, 2012 at 10:39 AM thank you for the placement in your contest PD...

Andrea Dietrich June 3, 2012 at 7:33 PM Joseph. I don't see any congrats here. It should be in the winners' circle. If it's not, maybe it is because you didn't put your name and other info that she might have asked her. This sure deserved a win in my opinion. Andrea Dietrich June 3, 2012 at 11:54 PM sorry, Joseph! We just never know what judges want sometimes. Keep up all your good work. I am going to fave this! Joseph May June 3, 2012 at 8:01 PM I had all the information required Andrea...I have since taken it off..thanks for your vote ..the beat goes on..

Black Eyed Susan June 2, 2012 at 1:52 PM it can be smooth or broken - a vast difference in the beats, that go on, just as life does... nice :) Joseph May June 3, 2012 at 8:07 PM thank you Susan

Harry Horsman May 31, 2012 at 7:54 AM like this Joseph, in fact it is very intriguing, excellent poem to read, and relate to. harry Joseph May June 3, 2012 at 8:06 PM thank you Harry

Andrea Dietrich May 30, 2012 at 10:46 PM I love how you related drum sounds to love. It can be fast and passionate or sad and broken. excellent choice of sound and emotion. Joseph May May 31, 2012 at 6:13 AM thank you Andrea..I appreciate your encouraging words

Pace Ink-U-Script May 30, 2012 at 1:09 PM Love this piece Joseph..well done my friend!! Joseph May May 30, 2012 at 4:19 PM thank you G..

Kash Poet May 30, 2012 at 10:28 AM Nice write here Joseph.If for contest then check nette's contest page again.(3rd line syll) Joseph May May 30, 2012 at 4:18 PM thanks for the heads up Kash

Phyllis Babcock May 30, 2012 at 9:50 AM The heart does resemble the drum beat. An excellent poem. love phyl Joseph May May 30, 2012 at 4:18 PM thanks for your kind words Phyl