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My heart bleeds But I'm immune The shaman walks In the midwinter moon The hawk guides me On my path today Under the wandering willow My heart does stray The wolf my ally With the Raven, I fly No man can touch me With the serpent, I lie I have lived many times In many forms, I've been My soul is immortal This universe I've seen Mysteries are unraveled In the initiate’s eyes Seeing only the light In the darkest of skies

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Patricia Cresswell

Date: 9/30/2017 2:07:00 PM

Thank you.

Phil Capitano

Date: 7/6/2017 7:41:00 AM

Your wolf brothers would be proud of this 'sighted' poem, your animal guides are with you. There are many ways of seeing, my friend, and to control such sight is a challenge. By the way, I checked out that book you recommended ~ very cool.

Lenna Walker

Date: 6/22/2017 11:51:00 AM

Very mystical feel. It reminds me of the books I have read about Indians and their ways of 'seeing'. My great Grandfather was full blooded Indian, so that heritage has always been interesting to me.. Great write Rick :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/22/2017 5:28:00 AM

A mystery revealing poem of the soul's quest for wisdom through space and time dear, WW ! Illuminating!

Frederic Parker

Date: 6/21/2017 6:06:00 PM

life is eternal, forms of life are not, understanding the difference between the two...wisdom

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/21/2017 5:03:00 PM

I think it's outstanding! Very mystical. Excellence in poetry, WW:)

Charlie Smith

Date: 6/21/2017 3:25:00 PM

Mystically immortal, a captivating concept and a great read. Well done White Wolf...

White Wolf
Date: 6/21/2017 3:31:00 PM

Thank you very much, Charlie /|\

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/21/2017 3:09:00 PM

This is really neat , interesting and also with a calmness :)

White Wolf
Date: 6/21/2017 3:21:00 PM

Thank you for your kind words, Heidi! I enjoy your work very much too /|\

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 6/21/2017 3:08:00 PM

Very mystically alluring poem, WW. The last stanza is so universal ... everyone can relate to it. Just beautifully worded ... mysteries are unraveled in the initiates eyes ... seeing only the light in the darkest of skies. Pure poetry. Splendid poem, my Aussie friend. Love always.

White Wolf
Date: 6/21/2017 3:18:00 PM

I'm so glad you enjoyed this one, RW /|\

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 6/21/2017 3:01:00 PM

it's too bad you can't enter your own contest. This sound very Native American: your words are pure and concise.

White Wolf
Date: 6/21/2017 3:08:00 PM

Haha, No, I don't think I'll enter it! Thanks, Dale /|\

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/21/2017 2:42:00 PM

- This reminds me of Indians, W.W. :) - Indian culture that includes religion, lifestyle, traditions, arts and crafts, dance and legends - All the little details that make the culture special and exciting - An impressive poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

White Wolf
Date: 6/21/2017 2:57:00 PM

Yes, there are MANY similarities with the Druid traditions and Native Americans! Even similar ancient stories! You have a keen eye, Anne-Lise! An open eye if you will! In an old post of mine, I mentioned one story, in particular, that was shared by both! Having to do with an eagle and a wren! I always enjoy seeing your comments /|\

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/21/2017 2:43:00 PM

Maybe I'm completely wrong ..............

Winged Warrior

Date: 6/21/2017 2:39:00 PM

You are definitely a lightworker my friend...loved every line...you are at one with nature, soul, and god...a poetic piety lol...god bless...^WW^

Winged Warrior
Date: 6/21/2017 9:21:00 PM

What the he%^&^$##@ are you talking about...just kidding my friend...I understand...peace and light...^WW^

White Wolf
Date: 6/21/2017 3:17:00 PM

Kahlil Gibran: A poet is a bird of unearthly excellence, who escapes from his celestial realm arrives in this world warbling. If we do not cherish him, he spreads his wings and flies back into his homeland. /|\

Winged Warrior
Date: 6/21/2017 2:54:00 PM

Lightworkers are here to spread love and light through the hands of the Creator...many poets are lightworkers...because one can not express more of oneself except through words and art...music follows as well...lightworkers resonate at a higher level of conscienceness ...some don't even know it... may the light be with you Wolfie lol...^WW^

White Wolf
Date: 6/21/2017 2:42:00 PM

I'm just your typical Altairian! Haha! May Awen shine from within you always, my friend /|\

Chris Green

Date: 6/21/2017 2:22:00 PM

Mystical and enchanting my friend. There is a quiet solitude to your words that feels so soft to read.

White Wolf
Date: 6/21/2017 2:29:00 PM

Earlier tonight I did a reading with my Druid animal oracle cards for a friend and this poem emerged from it! Thank you for your words Chris /|\