Drug Addict

one eye on the fall and the other one is missing
,do you see your mortality as a reflection that your still resisting
,ashamed of all your bitter pills and hopeless failures,
keep kicking yourself in vapor choking jailhouse capers
,drying out your eyes and drowning your thoughts
,blinding emotions monotone feelings you've bought
,the only tragedy is that you cant get past the lost pride,
your still digging your own grave and ignoring your own lie,
i wish i could pull out your spine and show you collapse,
romanticizing your death i feel you might finally shut your own trap
,finally hearing the wind again and awake in the dark
,i will admire this fear and immortalize the spark
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Lang Avatar
December 4, 2013 at 10:33 PM
thank you so much all of you feel free to add me on facebook love to talk to all of you!!!
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November 27, 2013 at 11:59 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup Mathew, You rocked me with your first poem by reminding my first poem here Addiction, Yours is a master piece. Enjoy your stay with us at PS you will find us a fun family
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December 4, 2013 at 10:57 PM
thanks find me on facebook [email protected] matthew lang nice to meet ya
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November 26, 2013 at 1:14 PM
Nice ending, against the awake and the dark Matthew:) ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
Lang Avatar
December 4, 2013 at 10:54 PM
thank you my email is [email protected] matthew lang find me on facebook k
A  Avatar
November 26, 2013 at 12:32 PM
wow, what a poem and theme Matthew... Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
Lang Avatar
December 4, 2013 at 10:56 PM
find me on facebook [email protected] matthew lang nice to meet cha
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November 26, 2013 at 12:26 PM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Matthew ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
Lang Avatar
December 4, 2013 at 10:55 PM
hey thanks im on facebook [email protected] matthew lang
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