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Drowsing in Dreams

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For the 8x8x8x8 Poetry Contest,
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Sleeping in blossoms, plush pillows! Fleeting dreams, of pink, cloud billows. Red, orange, purple and golden, spread over green park, so olden. Soft, the sighs, as hummingbird flies, Oft' plagued by purple martin cries. Falling through petals ~ deep, downy. Crawling time, scented and drowsy.

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/15/2025 11:50:00 AM

What a creative/colorful write and picture. It was a fun read. "Good Luck" Looks like we both did this one. Have a blessed day writing away..................

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 3/26/2025 4:31:00 PM

Sorry for the late response. Thank you for the joy of your lovely comment. Very best wishes. :)

Ink Empress

Date: 2/9/2025 1:14:00 AM

Dear evelyn, this is absolutely stunning, the cadence, rhythm and rhymes of your well articulated lines flowing with colorful imagery and depth! I love especially the lines “Oft' plagued by purple martin cries. Falling through petals ~ deep, downy. Crawling time, scented and drowsy.” The subtle use of alliterations and wordplay here is just exquisite! Pleasure reading! Sending you light always

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/9/2025 9:20:00 PM

Thank you for your very gratifying words of esteem, dear Ink. It pleases me to know that you enjoyed this poem's imagery. I hope that the coming week holds joy for you. :)

Valsa George

Date: 2/7/2025 5:52:00 PM

This is so lovely. A beautiful entry for the contest. Rhyming perfectly on both sides. All the Best, Evelyn.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/7/2025 10:23:00 PM

Thank you for your kind appreciation, Valsa. Thanks also for the vote of confidence and well wishes. Have a nice weekend. :)

CayCay Jennings

Date: 2/7/2025 3:09:00 PM

Now this is a breath of poetry that was so refreshing to inhale I am going to read more of your work. Love everything about your poem ... CayCay

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/7/2025 10:19:00 PM

Heartfelt thanks, CayCay. I'm glad you enjoyed this, and also glad that I'll be hearing more from you. Blessings.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/7/2025 8:33:00 AM

What a contrast in this poem. Great exposition of colors and then an excellent treat with lovely birds. Well done.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/7/2025 10:15:00 PM

Thank you very much. I'm so delighted. :)

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 2/4/2025 10:28:00 PM

A beautiful poem of uneventful sleep. I like best when I can't remember the dream.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/7/2025 10:12:00 PM

Deepest thanks for your lovely remarks, Yann. :)

Yann Rolland

Date: 2/4/2025 8:13:00 PM

so delicious to read this poem, sounds like a dream with the sweet images and pillows, enjoyed

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/7/2025 10:11:00 PM

Thank you for your wonderful response, Yann. :)