For the 8x8x8x8 Poetry Contest, Sponsored by Charles Messina
Sleeping in blossoms, plush pillows! Fleeting dreams, of pink, cloud billows. Red, orange, purple and golden, spread over green park, so olden. Soft, the sighs, as hummingbird flies, Oft' plagued by purple martin cries. Falling through petals ~ deep, downy. Crawling time, scented and drowsy.
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