Drowning In Your Eyes

drowning in your eyes
I no longer crave the shore
for immersed am I
folded within your two limbs
anchored in moonlight desire


*Moonlight Pond
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
May 24, 2012 at 3:39 PM
I LOVE yours, Debs!!
Green Avatar
May 23, 2012 at 11:53 PM
Bravo! LOVE it, GL in the contest!
Sivey Avatar
May 23, 2012 at 8:43 PM
This is an outstanding write my friend! I really enjoyed the fantastic moonlight piece you have written! Great Work!!
Ink-U-Script Avatar
May 23, 2012 at 7:10 PM
Wow, this is beautifully written Debbie!!
Burch Avatar
May 23, 2012 at 6:27 PM
Totally Awsome!!! Debbie, well done...:) best wishes for a big win, hugs, love ya, deb...(SM)
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