drowning in you

this feels so natural, still, my heart is pounding -

that look in your eyes...
    I feel like I'm sinking
    I feel like I'm floating

drowning in your blazing image,
maybe I'm not too keen
on the whole breathing thing
after all.
maybe I'll just drink up
the entire sea.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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