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Drowning- For Contest

My head is spinning   drowning in purple passion   perhaps I can fly…


2/24/16

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Daver Austin

February 29, 2016 at 3:01 PM

I got carried away with this one, Barb. Sounds like you did too. Love, daver

Daver Austin

March 2, 2016 at 10:52 AM

I am such a lover of the short form. Your one-liner is superb and should win most any contest. Love, daver

Barbara Gorelick

March 2, 2016 at 10:37 AM

Glad you liked it...apparently the judge didn't...so glad to hear from you. Barbara

Keith Bickerstaffe

February 29, 2016 at 1:56 PM

Well done Barbara... a splendid MONOKU with just the right number of syllables! Best wishes, Keith

Barbara Gorelick

March 2, 2016 at 10:38 AM

Thanks Keith, Nice of you to stop by.Hope all is well. BG

Connie Marcum Wong

February 27, 2016 at 3:04 PM

The feelings you have expressed are awesome in this beautiful entry Barbara. I am sure it will do great. I loved it! #7

Andrea Dietrich

February 25, 2016 at 8:11 PM

wow, I love how you did your take on that picture. One of my favorites!

Barbara Gorelick

March 2, 2016 at 10:39 AM

Wish you were the judge! Haha. A big N/A..BG

Winged Warrior

February 24, 2016 at 1:44 PM

Purple a heavenly color...enjoyed it...god bless...^WW^

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