Pace Ink-U-Script Poet Free verse

Drowning Deeply In Love

Lips touch the tip of morning with the awakening
             of thine eyes,
           accompanied 
           by inexhaustible
            thoughts of only 
             you. Drifting away
              from abed, thoughts
              trace in tandem with
             thy body in lost sight
           within the flat-bottomed
         vessel. Water pouring
       down accreting to the
     seductive oils
     forming to
      crystallized
        foam.
          Drowning
            deeply
               in
                 Love.


Pace, G
INK-U-SCRIPT

08-02-2012

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Brenda Chiri October 30, 2019 at 8:24 AM Wow another amazing piece of art right here! You haven't raised you pen up yet kind sir? Lol that's ok I guess some are intimidated hahaha! Or shy!;) Pace Ink-U-Script November 2, 2019 at 12:05 PM I’m now raising my pen up thanks to a special friend!!! ;)

Cherie Thomas June 14, 2013 at 5:36 AM Ink, oh I so love your words, they melt the heart. Just beautiful, my friend.....xx thankyou:) cherie

Caleah Buil May 15, 2013 at 9:53 AM Amazing! It was so smooth the way it was written. Kind of how love can feel!

Sean L Sanders February 24, 2013 at 6:56 AM Love it

Elizabeth Wesley September 14, 2012 at 8:25 AM You drown so gracefully with that poetic curve you created. Love how it all consolidates into those last 4 words.

Cynthia Alvez August 28, 2012 at 6:14 PM Divine penning in verse and form! Cynthia (no wonder you have soooooo many followers...I'm smiling here)

Lucilla Carrillo August 16, 2012 at 4:31 PM This is very good, coming from someone who knows. But I hope you don't drown. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla Pace Ink-U-Script August 17, 2012 at 9:52 AM Thank you dearly Lucilla!!

L.Ruby Meyer August 13, 2012 at 7:45 PM INK, glad you commented on one of mine as it led me to your page, this is a poem I read more than once to absorb its meaning, and I mean that in the best of ways. Very moving. X Peace, Ruby Pace Ink-U-Script August 17, 2012 at 9:52 AM No problem Ruby..I'm glad that you shared with me!!!

Carma Sanderson August 13, 2012 at 12:19 AM me too..... drowing hard.... Pace Ink-U-Script August 17, 2012 at 9:50 AM Lol..That's good news Carma..Congrats

Honestly J.T. August 8, 2012 at 2:28 PM Nice write. i like how you wrote it - JH Pace Ink-U-Script August 9, 2012 at 8:48 PM Thank you J.H!!!

Maxeen Dennis August 7, 2012 at 9:55 PM I truely like how you express your love. And the words use to describe it. Awesome! Pace Ink-U-Script August 9, 2012 at 8:47 PM Thank you dearly Maxeen!!

Richard Palmer August 7, 2012 at 10:47 AM great write PG Ink,love the style,love the flow,love the words Pace Ink-U-Script August 9, 2012 at 8:47 PM Thank you Richard always!!

Michael J. Falotico August 6, 2012 at 7:36 PM You just described my life with Rosanna. Beautiful piece my poet brother. MJF Pace Ink-U-Script August 9, 2012 at 8:46 PM Oh wow..thanks a lot Michael!

Len Gasun August 5, 2012 at 9:12 AM Nice write, Page. It makes me in love again while reading it. Thanks for sharing and wish you luck in all your endeavors. Pace Ink-U-Script August 9, 2012 at 8:44 PM Thank you dearly Leonora!!

Poet Destroyer A August 4, 2012 at 9:26 PM mmmmm... i love the image of tasting the morning... wow... this poem is one of your best ones yet... I love everything about it.. it is so dreamy and captivating. Last night I had a love revelation. I'm actually missing the feeling of falling and drowning in love... Hmmmm... hmmm..right back at you twice... Guess what I'm eating.. and I thought of~~~~~~~~~~~ ...xox~pd Pace Ink-U-Script August 5, 2012 at 8:00 AM Lmao...I have no clue..Thank you for sharing with me Pd..always a pleasure from the Destroyer!!! :)

Doreen Wright August 4, 2012 at 7:58 PM Wow...what a great write!!!! You must have a lot of arsenal and inspirtation in that wonderful and creative mind of yours. It definitely shows. This poem has me falling into the same sea of love :-) Keep writing!! Pace Ink-U-Script August 5, 2012 at 7:57 AM Love your comment!!! Always good to hear from you Doreen...that's one thing I try to do is to be creative...though it doesn't flow like your words..Huggs!!! And thank you dearly!!

Nette Onclaud August 4, 2012 at 11:16 AM you got more,pace??... looking forward!..:) huggs Pace Ink-U-Script August 5, 2012 at 7:55 AM Yes madam..I will be posting soon! :)

Joy Wellington August 3, 2012 at 5:37 PM Ooh, ooh oooh! My, my...just love the way your thoughts are drifting away..lovely form G INK. Thanks for stopping by me to read and leave a comment. One love. Joy Wells Pace Ink-U-Script August 5, 2012 at 7:54 AM Love your comment..:) thanks for stopping by..enjoyed your last poem I read!!!

Joseph May August 3, 2012 at 11:19 AM very nice write G...thanks for stopping by...Joseph Pace Ink-U-Script August 5, 2012 at 7:52 AM Thanks a lot Joseph!!!

Nette Onclaud August 3, 2012 at 8:18 AM i can't breathe.. need oxygen here!... just breathless!!... hugggs, pace! Pace Ink-U-Script August 5, 2012 at 7:52 AM Always a pleasure Nette..truly..Huggs!!!

Cynthia Alvez August 3, 2012 at 8:12 AM Wonder verse and form! Love both! C.Alvez Pace Ink-U-Script August 5, 2012 at 7:45 AM Thank you dearly Cynthia!!! :)

Wilma Neels August 3, 2012 at 5:32 AM Love that crystallized foam and this write of your Pace, enjoyed this afternoon :) Wilma Pace Ink-U-Script August 5, 2012 at 7:44 AM Thank you Wilma!!! Always grateful for you to stop by!!

Bertha Davis August 2, 2012 at 8:55 PM Simply Fantastic!! I marvel at your talent and skill. XOXO Pace Ink-U-Script August 5, 2012 at 7:43 AM Thank you Bertha...love your support!!! Hugs!!! :)

David Williams August 2, 2012 at 4:02 PM Pace, I think this is just fabulous, love the format as well, but most of all I love it when people use either thou, thy, thine, in modern poetry it just brings that little touch of flair.. well done...David Pace Ink-U-Script August 5, 2012 at 7:41 AM Thanks David...always!!

Anne-Lise Andresen August 2, 2012 at 2:49 PM A poen that anyone can fall in love....so sweet and beautiful Pace,G - // Anne-Lise Pace Ink-U-Script August 5, 2012 at 7:39 AM Thanks Anne always my dear!!!

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