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Drowning Deeply in LOVE

                Lips touch the tip of morning with the awakening
             of thine eyes,
           accompanied 
           by inexhaustible
            thoughts of only 
             you. Drifting away
              from abed, thoughts
              trace in tandem with
             thy body in lost sight
           within the flat-bottomed
         vessel. Water pouring
       down accreting to the
     seductive oils
     forming to
      crystallized
        foam.
          Drowning
            deeply
               in
                 Love.


Pace, G
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08-02-2012

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Date: 6/14/2013 5:36:00 AM
Ink, oh I so love your words, they melt the heart. Just beautiful, my friend.....xx thankyou:) cherie
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Date: 5/15/2013 9:53:00 AM
Amazing! It was so smooth the way it was written. Kind of how love can feel!
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Date: 2/24/2013 6:56:00 AM
Love it
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Date: 9/14/2012 8:25:00 AM
You drown so gracefully with that poetic curve you created. Love how it all consolidates into those last 4 words.
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Date: 8/28/2012 6:14:00 PM
Divine penning in verse and form! Cynthia (no wonder you have soooooo many followers...I'm smiling here)
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Date: 8/16/2012 4:31:00 PM
This is very good, coming from someone who knows. But I hope you don't drown. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 8/17/2012 9:52:00 AM
Thank you dearly Lucilla!!
Date: 8/13/2012 7:45:00 PM
INK, glad you commented on one of mine as it led me to your page, this is a poem I read more than once to absorb its meaning, and I mean that in the best of ways. Very moving. X Peace, Ruby
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Date: 8/17/2012 9:52:00 AM
No problem Ruby..I'm glad that you shared with me!!!
Date: 8/13/2012 12:19:00 AM
me too..... drowing hard....
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Date: 8/17/2012 9:50:00 AM
Lol..That's good news Carma..Congrats
Date: 8/8/2012 2:28:00 PM
Nice write. i like how you wrote it - JH
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Date: 8/9/2012 8:48:00 PM
Thank you J.H!!!
Date: 8/7/2012 9:55:00 PM
I truely like how you express your love. And the words use to describe it. Awesome!
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Date: 8/9/2012 8:47:00 PM
Thank you dearly Maxeen!!
Date: 8/7/2012 10:47:00 AM
great write PG Ink,love the style,love the flow,love the words
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Date: 8/9/2012 8:47:00 PM
Thank you Richard always!!
Date: 8/6/2012 7:36:00 PM
You just described my life with Rosanna. Beautiful piece my poet brother. MJF
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Date: 8/9/2012 8:46:00 PM
Oh wow..thanks a lot Michael!
Date: 8/5/2012 9:12:00 AM
Nice write, Page. It makes me in love again while reading it. Thanks for sharing and wish you luck in all your endeavors.
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Date: 8/9/2012 8:44:00 PM
Thank you dearly Leonora!!
Date: 8/4/2012 9:26:00 PM
mmmmm... i love the image of tasting the morning... wow... this poem is one of your best ones yet... I love everything about it.. it is so dreamy and captivating. Last night I had a love revelation. I'm actually missing the feeling of falling and drowning in love... Hmmmm... hmmm..right back at you twice... Guess what I'm eating.. and I thought of~~~~~~~~~~~ ...xox~pd
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Date: 8/5/2012 8:00:00 AM
Lmao...I have no clue..Thank you for sharing with me Pd..always a pleasure from the Destroyer!!! :)
Date: 8/4/2012 7:58:00 PM
Wow...what a great write!!!! You must have a lot of arsenal and inspirtation in that wonderful and creative mind of yours. It definitely shows. This poem has me falling into the same sea of love :-) Keep writing!!
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Date: 8/5/2012 7:57:00 AM
Love your comment!!! Always good to hear from you Doreen...that's one thing I try to do is to be creative...though it doesn't flow like your words..Huggs!!! And thank you dearly!!
Date: 8/4/2012 11:16:00 AM
you got more,pace??... looking forward!..:) huggs
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Date: 8/5/2012 7:55:00 AM
Yes madam..I will be posting soon! :)
Date: 8/3/2012 5:37:00 PM
Ooh, ooh oooh! My, my...just love the way your thoughts are drifting away..lovely form G INK. Thanks for stopping by me to read and leave a comment. One love. Joy Wells
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Date: 8/5/2012 7:54:00 AM
Love your comment..:) thanks for stopping by..enjoyed your last poem I read!!!
Date: 8/3/2012 11:19:00 AM
very nice write G...thanks for stopping by...Joseph
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Date: 8/5/2012 7:52:00 AM
Thanks a lot Joseph!!!
Date: 8/3/2012 8:18:00 AM
i can't breathe.. need oxygen here!... just breathless!!... hugggs, pace!
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Date: 8/5/2012 7:52:00 AM
Always a pleasure Nette..truly..Huggs!!!
Date: 8/3/2012 8:17:00 AM
Lips puckering up for a kiss - viewed sideways..... Love it. Suzette
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Date: 8/5/2012 7:51:00 AM
Thank you for the kind visit!!
Date: 8/3/2012 8:12:00 AM
Wonder verse and form! Love both! C.Alvez
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Date: 8/5/2012 7:45:00 AM
Thank you dearly Cynthia!!! :)
Date: 8/3/2012 5:32:00 AM
Love that crystallized foam and this write of your Pace, enjoyed this afternoon :) Wilma
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Date: 8/5/2012 7:44:00 AM
Thank you Wilma!!! Always grateful for you to stop by!!
Date: 8/2/2012 8:55:00 PM
Simply Fantastic!! I marvel at your talent and skill. XOXO
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Date: 8/5/2012 7:43:00 AM
Thank you Bertha...love your support!!! Hugs!!! :)
Date: 8/2/2012 4:02:00 PM
Pace, I think this is just fabulous, love the format as well, but most of all I love it when people use either thou, thy, thine, in modern poetry it just brings that little touch of flair.. well done...David
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Date: 8/5/2012 7:41:00 AM
Thanks David...always!!
Date: 8/2/2012 2:49:00 PM
A poen that anyone can fall in love....so sweet and beautiful Pace,G - // Anne-Lise
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Date: 8/5/2012 7:39:00 AM
Thanks Anne always my dear!!!
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