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Drowning Deeply In Love

Lips touch the tip of morning with the awakening
             of thine eyes,
           accompanied 
           by inexhaustible
            thoughts of only 
             you. Drifting away
              from abed, thoughts
              trace in tandem with
             thy body in lost sight
           within the flat-bottomed
         vessel. Water pouring
       down accreting to the
     seductive oils
     forming to
      crystallized
        foam.
          Drowning
            deeply
               in
                 Love.


Pace, G
INK-U-SCRIPT

08-02-2012

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Brenda Chiri Date: 10/30/2019 8:24:00 AM Wow another amazing piece of art right here! You haven't raised you pen up yet kind sir? Lol that's ok I guess some are intimidated hahaha! Or shy!;) Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 11/2/2019 12:05:00 PM I’m now raising my pen up thanks to a special friend!!! ;)

Cherie Thomas Date: 6/14/2013 5:36:00 AM Ink, oh I so love your words, they melt the heart. Just beautiful, my friend.....xx thankyou:) cherie Login to Reply

Caleah Buil Date: 5/15/2013 9:53:00 AM Amazing! It was so smooth the way it was written. Kind of how love can feel! Login to Reply

Sean L Sanders Date: 2/24/2013 6:56:00 AM Love it Login to Reply

Elizabeth Wesley Date: 9/14/2012 8:25:00 AM You drown so gracefully with that poetic curve you created. Love how it all consolidates into those last 4 words. Login to Reply

Cynthia Alvez Date: 8/28/2012 6:14:00 PM Divine penning in verse and form! Cynthia (no wonder you have soooooo many followers...I'm smiling here) Login to Reply

Lucilla Carrillo Date: 8/16/2012 4:31:00 PM This is very good, coming from someone who knows. But I hope you don't drown. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 8/17/2012 9:52:00 AM Thank you dearly Lucilla!!

L.Ruby Meyer Date: 8/13/2012 7:45:00 PM INK, glad you commented on one of mine as it led me to your page, this is a poem I read more than once to absorb its meaning, and I mean that in the best of ways. Very moving. X Peace, Ruby Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 8/17/2012 9:52:00 AM No problem Ruby..I'm glad that you shared with me!!!

Carma Sanderson Date: 8/13/2012 12:19:00 AM me too..... drowing hard.... Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 8/17/2012 9:50:00 AM Lol..That's good news Carma..Congrats

Honestly J.T. Date: 8/8/2012 2:28:00 PM Nice write. i like how you wrote it - JH Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 8/9/2012 8:48:00 PM Thank you J.H!!!

Maxeen Dennis Date: 8/7/2012 9:55:00 PM I truely like how you express your love. And the words use to describe it. Awesome! Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 8/9/2012 8:47:00 PM Thank you dearly Maxeen!!

Richard Palmer Date: 8/7/2012 10:47:00 AM great write PG Ink,love the style,love the flow,love the words Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 8/9/2012 8:47:00 PM Thank you Richard always!!

Michael J. Falotico Date: 8/6/2012 7:36:00 PM You just described my life with Rosanna. Beautiful piece my poet brother. MJF Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 8/9/2012 8:46:00 PM Oh wow..thanks a lot Michael!

Len Gasun Date: 8/5/2012 9:12:00 AM Nice write, Page. It makes me in love again while reading it. Thanks for sharing and wish you luck in all your endeavors. Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 8/9/2012 8:44:00 PM Thank you dearly Leonora!!

Poet Destroyer A Date: 8/4/2012 9:26:00 PM mmmmm... i love the image of tasting the morning... wow... this poem is one of your best ones yet... I love everything about it.. it is so dreamy and captivating. Last night I had a love revelation. I'm actually missing the feeling of falling and drowning in love... Hmmmm... hmmm..right back at you twice... Guess what I'm eating.. and I thought of~~~~~~~~~~~ ...xox~pd Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 8/5/2012 8:00:00 AM Lmao...I have no clue..Thank you for sharing with me Pd..always a pleasure from the Destroyer!!! :)

Doreen Wright Date: 8/4/2012 7:58:00 PM Wow...what a great write!!!! You must have a lot of arsenal and inspirtation in that wonderful and creative mind of yours. It definitely shows. This poem has me falling into the same sea of love :-) Keep writing!! Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 8/5/2012 7:57:00 AM Love your comment!!! Always good to hear from you Doreen...that's one thing I try to do is to be creative...though it doesn't flow like your words..Huggs!!! And thank you dearly!!

Nette Onclaud Date: 8/4/2012 11:16:00 AM you got more,pace??... looking forward!..:) huggs Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 8/5/2012 7:55:00 AM Yes madam..I will be posting soon! :)

Joy Wellington Date: 8/3/2012 5:37:00 PM Ooh, ooh oooh! My, my...just love the way your thoughts are drifting away..lovely form G INK. Thanks for stopping by me to read and leave a comment. One love. Joy Wells Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 8/5/2012 7:54:00 AM Love your comment..:) thanks for stopping by..enjoyed your last poem I read!!!

Joseph May Date: 8/3/2012 11:19:00 AM very nice write G...thanks for stopping by...Joseph Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 8/5/2012 7:52:00 AM Thanks a lot Joseph!!!

Nette Onclaud Date: 8/3/2012 8:18:00 AM i can't breathe.. need oxygen here!... just breathless!!... hugggs, pace! Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 8/5/2012 7:52:00 AM Always a pleasure Nette..truly..Huggs!!!

Cynthia Alvez Date: 8/3/2012 8:12:00 AM Wonder verse and form! Love both! C.Alvez Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 8/5/2012 7:45:00 AM Thank you dearly Cynthia!!! :)

Wilma Neels Date: 8/3/2012 5:32:00 AM Love that crystallized foam and this write of your Pace, enjoyed this afternoon :) Wilma Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 8/5/2012 7:44:00 AM Thank you Wilma!!! Always grateful for you to stop by!!

Bertha Davis Date: 8/2/2012 8:55:00 PM Simply Fantastic!! I marvel at your talent and skill. XOXO Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 8/5/2012 7:43:00 AM Thank you Bertha...love your support!!! Hugs!!! :)

David Williams Date: 8/2/2012 4:02:00 PM Pace, I think this is just fabulous, love the format as well, but most of all I love it when people use either thou, thy, thine, in modern poetry it just brings that little touch of flair.. well done...David Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 8/5/2012 7:41:00 AM Thanks David...always!!

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/2/2012 2:49:00 PM A poen that anyone can fall in love....so sweet and beautiful Pace,G - // Anne-Lise Login to Reply Pace Ink-U-Script Date: 8/5/2012 7:39:00 AM Thanks Anne always my dear!!!

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