Drowning

Keep me going 
Hold me tall 
My bodies flowing 
Please don't let me fall
Your burden lays on me 
You weigh me down
Cant you see 
I am about to drown
I hurt inside 
I am overcome with emotion
So hard i have tried 
Now i drown in your ocean
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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