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Drowning

Drowning sinking breathless chasing that dream leaping fast forward catching the air inhale that happiness exhale much negative enjoy the journey worth the wait in the end.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/3/2012 12:28:00 PM
A race through space and time... wonderful... Terry
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Date: 7/31/2012 8:28:00 AM
‡ The Journey Yesss, Sweet Beautiful Dawnie * I Love Your Photo, You Truly Are Quite Beautiful, Wow * 'Drowning Sinking Breathless;' Yeap, That's It & Thank You For Your Tender Beauty's Lovely Visit; Breathless * My Luv, Rachel ‡
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Date: 7/29/2012 6:47:00 AM
Very very Nice Dawn.... hugs Michael
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Date: 7/28/2012 7:26:00 PM
In living we are drowning. what a cool concept!
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Date: 7/28/2012 2:45:00 PM
worthwhile journeys are always fulfilling,great write Dawn
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Dawn Mclaughlin
Date: 7/28/2012 2:50:00 PM
Thank you Richard x

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