Drowning

Drowning sinking breathless 
chasing that dream 
leaping fast forward
 catching the air 
inhale that happiness
 exhale much negative
 enjoy the journey
 worth the wait
 in the end.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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O'Leary Avatar
August 3, 2012 at 12:28 PM
A race through space and time... wonderful... Terry
St.Cross Avatar
July 31, 2012 at 8:28 AM
‡ The Journey Yesss, Sweet Beautiful Dawnie * I Love Your Photo, You Truly Are Quite Beautiful, Wow * 'Drowning Sinking Breathless;' Yeap, That's It & Thank You For Your Tender Beauty's Lovely Visit; Breathless * My Luv, Rachel ‡
Falotico Avatar
July 29, 2012 at 6:47 AM
Very very Nice Dawn.... hugs Michael
Dietrich Avatar
July 28, 2012 at 7:26 PM
In living we are drowning. what a cool concept!
Palmer Avatar
July 28, 2012 at 2:45 PM
worthwhile journeys are always fulfilling,great write Dawn
Mclaughlin Avatar
July 28, 2012 at 2:50 PM
Thank you Richard x
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