Drowning

¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦ in life:
Something ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦ drew me down,
My ¦¦¦ strength ¦¦¦¦¦ failed me.
¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦
¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦
¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦ suddenly needed help
And ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦
¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦ I ended up
¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦ in Spoon River.
¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦
¦¦¦ they hauled me up ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦
¦¦¦ unhooked the rope ¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦
And ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦ flung my ¦¦¦¦¦ arms
Over the ¦¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ top of the tower --
¦¦¦ they slipped ¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦¦
¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦ ¦¦¦¦¦ down, I plunged
Through ¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦¦ darkness!


(Blackout of Mickey MGrew by Edgar Lee Masters)
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Terry Avatar
October 5, 2026 at 11:29 AM
Blackout poetry is difficult, and you told a harrowing story with this piece. Great work!
Kitchin Avatar
October 5, 2026 at 12:59 PM
Angela, thank you.
Cunningham Avatar
October 5, 2026 at 7:58 AM
You're an expert at this Tania, you've gone beneath the layers and produced a new poem from it. Tom🌹
Kitchin Avatar
October 5, 2026 at 12:59 PM
Tom, thank you.
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